If Love Is Our Fate

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contest Love Story Poetry

sponsor Regina Mcintosh

If love is our fate, let each moment be our journey,
let love be our guiding star to follow

From the moment we first met
our souls became a guardian of time
our eyes became the warmth that melted away the world
   with wishes and dreams

Like a brightly blazing star that leaves an imprint
   on the eyes of our enchantment
our hands first held the morning's twilight of romance
and we walked on the path of natural beauty
   that laid before us
that led to a silent sanctuary of sensual sentiment
   from our first kiss
where we warmed ourselves in each other's arms
   filled with laughter and smiles
and ran beneath the star-lit sky
inviting innocence to peel back the layers
filled with sacred moments of gentle understanding
so we could share our love as one...forever

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Date: 5/10/2024 12:27:00 AM
undoubtedly beautiful, transports you to a whole other world.
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Date: 5/9/2024 11:03:00 PM
Such seamless alliterations dear frederick. And beautifully woven in this! The way you express love always leaves me in awe! The sincerity of emotions as well as the wY youv articulated lines in such a poetic manner is what makes your poems stand out! So descriptive and moving! Pleasure reading this! Congratulations also on your win
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Date: 5/3/2024 12:35:00 AM
Awwwwwww... I'm drunken on romantic longings with this write... love the sanctuary line and the one about twilight. You have a romantic soul. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 5/1/2024 12:22:00 PM
Your poem beautifully captures the essence of love as a journey filled with enchantment, warmth, and shared experiences. The imagery of love as a guiding star and the metaphor of souls becoming guardians of time evoke a sense of destiny and connection beyond the physical realm.
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