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If Love Is a Battlefield

If love is a battlefield When sarcastic words are launched like glass hand grenades Shattering your dignity, you're bruised, battered and afraid When coming home fills you with a dreadful trepidation When your words walk on eggshells trembling in expectation When every word you utter, puts you in imminent danger When the man you said you'd love forever, is now a total stranger Chorus If love is a battlefield then, somethings not right Home should be a safe haven, not cut like a knife Oh, if love is a battlefield and there's a cry in the night It's time to seek shelter the choice is fight or flight When a question ignites a fire and the flames lick your skin Your hope burns to the ground your spirit dies within When your courage and your value have packed their bags and left All you want is some comfort and a simple day of rest Chorus You bravely, put out the fires one by one Thinking tomorrow will be better, when today is done but, When the bottle is his best friend your battle can't be won Unless he agrees that the whiskey is his real enemy Never, ever, will you have peace and be truly free. Chorus repeat fade John Derek Hamilton December 14,2016

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Date: 1/11/2017 11:40:00 AM
John this is a great song with a strong message. Thanks for pointing me here and visiting my work (many similarities; the truth has many friends). Keep on rockin'.
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/11/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Phil, yeah similar vibe similar experiences, thanks for the visit.
Date: 12/16/2016 6:40:00 AM
The never-ending saga of love/hate relationships, well played John. Now I have Pat Benatar stuck in my head.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/16/2016 8:09:00 AM
Pat Benatar that's good. Thanks for the visit, my privilege.
Date: 12/14/2016 11:16:00 PM
I like it...and it is so true. Wish I could hear the music. Carole
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/15/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Carol, music is coming.
Date: 12/14/2016 5:33:00 PM
Excellent! John, you have written this situation very well.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/14/2016 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Heidi
Date: 12/14/2016 5:08:00 PM
I like the imagery here John...It is a tough subject to write about.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/14/2016 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Tim, yeah maybe not great timing, should get some happy stuff going.
Date: 12/14/2016 2:56:00 PM
The title is perfect for the heartbreaking scene of domestic abuse - such a powerful lyric John Bravo for tackling such a difficult subject:-) hugs Jan xx7
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/14/2016 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Jan, a never ending problem it seems.
Date: 12/14/2016 10:56:00 AM
Wonderfully composed with a strong message about a sad and horrific situation. This one hits hard John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/14/2016 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Chris, it breaks my heart this problem, never seems to end.

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