If Life Ended Today

If life ended today,
nothing I would leave behind
but the fairest love I gave away;
and who wouldn't say I was too kind?


Looking back with disbelief and much dismay, I see the old, wretched me
overwhelmed by the lustful urges that
could have killed me before I had reached the promising age of thirty;
but the Lord spared me from wrath. 


If life ended today,
with these hands no treasure
of any value I would attempt to take away...
considering salvation the worthiest measure. 


My yesterdays were illusions of an unfulfilled desire
reflecting a cold, indirect light... and it  certainly did not shine on me,
when onlookers stopped but refused to help me when I was stuck in mire;
to whom should I be thankful, if not to my merciful Lord who restored my dignity?


If life ended today,
no regrets would turn into grins,
remembering how wrong choices misguided my morality;
hope did not exist...it took repentance and faith to overcome my sins.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/25/2011 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Walayee Whitlock's contest "If I Only Had 1 Day To Live". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:51:00 PM
Good writing Andrew. Congratulations on winning in Walayee's contest with this.
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:32:00 AM
Awesome job Andrew good to see your most worthy poem in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your poem's honored 14th place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:06:00 PM
How beautiful. Congratulations Andrew. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of walayee, Andrew
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:55:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your wonderful win in Lay's contest with this touching write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 10/31/2010 12:00:00 PM
You chose a subject on which I have reflected many times, Andrew. What would it be like "If life ended today." I admire your faith and your hope. Keep that positive perspective. Soup mail in a moment, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/28/2010 4:03:00 PM
Such a lovely poem of your inner outpouring Andrew my friend.. a magnificent legacy u will have left of marvelous poetry .. shared by all of us.. lu..
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Date: 10/28/2010 3:38:00 PM
.,;;~~~*~~~;;,.*.,;;~~~*~~~;;,. Shadows of creativeness are pure bliss Compute the phrases into poetic verse and lines Thoughts are dancing in the shadows enjoyed your work!!
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Date: 10/28/2010 1:20:00 PM
From you thoughts, it seems you have drank the cup of life fulln to its brim like me, Andrew
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