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Poetry Form: Free Verse

Inspired: 2023 November 30

 

*1st Place*
If it wasn't for poetry
Contest Judged: 2023 December 05
Sponsored by: Silent One

 

Image: Mom on the church organ by The Poet

If it wasn't for poetry

I am unsure if there's some general word I am going for, but it best fits into the mix, and that would be, 'inspiration.' Having that said ... straight to the heart of the matter ... my mom. Self-driven, accomplished, multi-talented, advocator of The Word, loving daughter, sister, cousin, wife, mother, aunty, grand and great-grandmother, and lastly, not a stranger to people kind of a person, more like, "Is she your mom!", kind of a people person, ... and kind too. Her talents beyond The Word were in music. She plays any musical instrument, from a tambourine to an accordion, and the organ to the drums. Practically everything in between like a harmonica, but her ace was the ukelele and guitar. She composed hundreds of songs, wrote all the lyrics and accompanying medleys. Today, her compositions grace many churches in the country, besides Hawaii, since she traveled a lot being an Evangelical minister. If it wasn't for poetry, I'd be a 60's year-old kid who never had a mom.
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 7:33 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful/lovely ~ write/story again. Have a wonderful day with your win...............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 8:21 AM
Thanks again too, Paula. Have a blessed day. Aloha, William
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 10:02 AM
- Congratulations on your first place in the "If it wasn't for poetry" poetry contest, William :) - Poetry soup the magical world of poems ... a journey through soul and heart :) - hugs
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 10:44 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. I stopped gauging the sponsors methods--they're quite different in some ways. Aloha, William
One Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 8:25 AM
awww thats a lovely photo of your mamma... this is a touching poem.. What a talented lady... Thank you for taking part in the contest and congratulations on your first place.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 9:34 AM
Thanks, Silent One. I hit onto this, hey, what you know. I appreciate it, yep that's mom, two extremes--mom besides the above, she had the looks dept. too, dad's boxer/realtor. Aloha, William
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 8:32 AM
A wonderful/lovely ~ write/story/picture. Love It. Sounds like you are very lucky to have a great/talented Mom. Good Luck... Have a blessed/wonderful ~ day/weekend..............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 1:21 AM
Great, Paula, feeling the love. I truly believe that you guys would have hit off from the get-go. Aloha and be blessed, William
Sharma  Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 12:30 AM
Oh my, so much love for your mom reflects in these beautiful words by you & I can truly resonate with this heartwarming feeling! I sincerely admire & love my mum so much & reading this write warmed my soul to the core.. She sounds like a precious soul with a beautiful heart too... I adore this take for the contest and it's definitely so unique & profoundly knitted.. Wow..
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 5:03 AM
Thanks aplenty, Hiya, for noting my mom via my write of her. As I found it hard to write for Lasaad's Stoicism contest as they don't like to be on the other side of a camera, or be spotlighted. So how would one know being that's the case. Whether a stoic or an agape person say that they are--instantly, their score card dropped. That's Java in the coffee, anyways, cheers. Aloha, William
Empress Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 12:09 AM
Your mom sounds like a talented soul too, how beautifully you’ve described her and how you’ve written this is so profound and so descriptive. A very unique take this is for the contest. I think this is so touching and silent one definitely will love it. This definitely seems like a top winning take to me. Pleasure reading your heartfelt and soulful work as always. Best wishes for the contest
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 4:45 AM
On behalf my mom, thank you, Ink Empress. In truth, noting my write of her basically puts the spotlight over her and her reaction would be like any stoic or agape person you'd expect to be. Anyway, you'd love my mom like so many countless souls did. Mahalo much, William
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