If It Wasn't For Poetry

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November 27, 2003

"If It Was Not For Poetry" Poetry Contest

less than 20 lines, No metaphor, no simile, no poetic devices

Sponsor: Silent One

 

A few passionate words on paper - where did they emanate from?
As if in a trance, stared for the longest time, tears fell…drop by drop…
Every drop, every translucent pearl of grief…
How long they were encased in a shell of shattered  hope and despair!
I felt rapt in a sublime feeling of purification, was that my Catharsis!

Finally my life has veered to an unexpected course,
Finally awakened from a long slumber of drudgery,
Emotions cascaded resounding in assurance,
Real life getting penned on paper…with an eloquent pen,
Gone through enormous pain and suffering,
That has also enriched me with immense strength, and belief!

Creativity is all I want, Poetic euphoria is all I have,
I cast away the negativity as meaningless part of my life,
I am jubilant in an unstoppable exaltation of victory,
Dark days of despondent agony have disappeared,
No more feelings of gloomy triviality and insignificance!

Found my oasis...in nature, in love, in spirituality, 
If it wasn’t for Poetry, I would have walked a meaningless path,
This is my gift, my bliss, my refuge - sometimes I am unrecognizable to myself…

Poetry has given me liberation, an existence significativa!

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Date: 12/6/2023 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Poetry is us/we are poetry. Have a wonderful day with your win...............
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Date: 12/5/2023 9:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your first place in the "If it wasn't for poetry" poetry contest, Mala :) - Poetry soup the magical world of poems ... a journey through soul and heart :) - hugs
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Date: 12/5/2023 8:39:00 AM
You describe it so poetically Mala, such a wonderful poem showing the reason why you write.. Thank you for taking part in the contest and congratulations on your first place.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/5/2023 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet. I love your themes, and truly feel fortunate to be placed high, in the company of all brilliant poets. Really appreciate your placement and most encouraging words.
Date: 11/27/2023 4:17:00 PM
Every line meaningful of your heart. Words Written an ease of self. Good luck in Silent One's contest.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/27/2023 6:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Eve. True, this theme brings the pain - I forgot my passions and my identity for many many years! It has come back...inspired by a childhood friend. I am so happy being in the community of such talented and sensitive group of people. Love and Hugs ~
Date: 11/27/2023 12:49:00 PM
Mala….l love this….and summed your feelings and the poem up beautifully in the the last stanza! Well written….Debx
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/27/2023 2:10:00 PM
Thank you, Deb. So glad to see you visit my page! Really appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 11/27/2023 8:03:00 AM
-"Creativity and poetic euphoria" ... written with your feelings ... beautiful, Mala - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/27/2023 8:10:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise. This is a great theme...just poured my heart! Really appreciate your visit and thoughtful comment. Love ~
Date: 11/27/2023 7:04:00 AM
Youve captured the theme so well Mala, it is an oasis where we can create just about anything that comes into our minds. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/27/2023 7:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom. I am so glad you read the poem, and commented on it. How are you doing, Dear Friend? I was thinking of you a lot...you are a brave, courageous, inspiring soul...my best wishes and love to you ~ Mala
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