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If I Were Your Smartphone

If I was your smartphone
You would talk to me for hours
If I was your smartphone
You would hold me and make sure I was safe
If I was your smartphone
You would keep me close and check on me often
If I was your smartphone
You would trust me and ask me for help
If I was your smartphone
You would rely on and be grateful for me
If I was your smartphone
You would be excited when I sought your attention
If I was your smartphone 
You would make sure my battery was charged
If I was your smartphone
You would play games with me and think I was fun
If I was your smartphone
You would whisper into my ear and share your secrets
If I was your smartphone 
Imagine all the wonderful times we would share 
If only
I was your smartphone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Oknin Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 2:34 AM
Very clever. Well written too.
Sidwell Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 8:03 AM
Thank you!
Westerman Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 4:50 AM
Nice, neat poem, perfect poignancy.
Sidwell Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 12:26 PM
Thank you!!
Francescone Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 4:17 PM
Absolutely true, sad, undisputable, and amazing... If only we would realize this and embrace it....
Sidwell Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 12:26 PM
Thank you Woody!!
Christian Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 11:07 PM
Wonderful poem, Thanks for your feedback on my poems
Sidwell Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 12:27 PM
Thank you Diane!!
Schiavina Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 9:49 AM
A masterpiece!
Sidwell Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 10:08 AM
Thank you!
Nicholsen Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 1:06 PM
Awesome write
Sidwell Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 8:35 AM
Thank you!!
Empress Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 11:06 PM
Dear robert, i can feel the touch of wittiness flowing throughout your write so well woven. I think this might be the very first poem iv seen written for “ if i were your smartphone “ in a romantic manner. Clever and innovative. And very well delivered too. I live literally too on my phone so .. hah! This is brilliant. Loved this.
Sidwell Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Very generous, thank you Empress!
Jones Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 10:08 PM
Original and witty ! Love this!
Sidwell Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Thank you Karen!
One Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 12:12 PM
Now this is one of the most clever romantic poems I have read... nicely done and very clever dear Robert... If I was a smartphone, by girl would never put me down,.... she is always on it... even when she has a headache!
Sidwell Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Thank you Silent One!
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 1:19 PM
wow, I LOVE the creativity here. If only we treated our loved ones like we did our smart phones. a FAVE
Sidwell Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 9:57 AM
Thank you so much Andrea! I really appreciate it.
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