If I Were To Write You a Love Letter

An image
of you is
how I’d start,
preparing myself
to write

Pretending
to work up
all my nerves
to express what’s
on my mind

I’d say
my heart
it chose you
first, and I guess
my heart was right

For all
my thoughts
are filled with
you as you
control my time

I’d want
to explain
your effect on
me when you
simply say hello

How a
normal look
or your perfect
smile can turn
my day around

I’d want
to write about
your face and
the loveliness
you show

How I
succumb to
all your beauty
for in its hold
I’m bound

I’d follow
by, outlining
things, I love
about you
most

Your caring
kindness and
tender ways
and the grace
that you possess

I’d write
how I could
die the night
the day I hold
you close

And detail
all that I
would give to
feel your warm
caress

If I were
ever to write
this letter I’d
have so much
to say

This letter
of love I’d
write to you
conveying my
feelings deep

I’d hope
the words
I write to
you would help
me find a way

To bring
your heart
within my own
and make my life
complete

Written in Texas -2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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J.T. Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 11:59 PM
nicely done. I like this poem -JT
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 11:15 AM
Thank you Brother....Sorry I missed this comment, I'd just gotten back from Korea during this time. :^) MC
C Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 7:42 AM
Awhhh you've captivated my attention from 'Image' all the way through until 'complete.' Mesmerizing work. ?
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 1:35 PM
Oh my...Wow, thanks! I love it that people are enjoying this poem so much! Thank you for reading and thanks for taking the time to comment. MC
Rain Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 11:24 PM
very beautiful !!
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 1:32 PM
Wow, Yvette -beautiful...look who's talking LOL! Thank You, I'm glad you liked it! MC
Ellison Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 5:00 PM
You sentimental old devil, you!!! LOL GREAT!
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 6:50 PM
I am a sentimental old devil...soooooo LOL!!! Thanks Jack, I appreciate you dropping in and checking me out. Very Cool! MC
Brewer Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 4:25 PM
Aww, how lovely,I've gone all weak at the knees xx Lovely poem xx
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 6:49 PM
Oh Jenny, weakness in the knees...I didn't know I had that effect LOL! Seriously thank you. Funny, I wrote this for someone who'll probably never know it... MC
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 1:06 PM
Romantic lines that you have penned..Enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for visiting my work and taking time to comment..Also, thank you for defending our nation during your time in the military..Sara
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 3:18 PM
Aww, thanks Sara! And no thanks needed, it's my honor and pleasure to serve. I'm in Afghanistan now and I'm proud to do it -and it's really not that bad. Take Care Sara and I'll continue to read.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 7:49 AM
Good morning Marquis., read response below.
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 8:54 AM
Well rick, I've actually written one which touches on that subject, wasn't sure if I was going to post it -maybe I will...
Lamoureux Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 6:51 AM
Your wife can have no doubt concerning your feelings.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 7:52 AM
Thats the story you should be writing about. Get into the muck, let the feelings flow, overwhelm us. Don't be afraid of getting dirty! Make us feel the pain.
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 3:45 PM
Ha! that's a whole another story my man LOL!! But thanks for the comment -You Rock! MC
Thomas Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 11:11 PM
Wow,,, MC...this is just beautiful,,, and yes Im back!!! LOL,, love the flow and all the beauty of , what a love letter should be:)
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 3:44 PM
Ha, Ha, Ha! Welcome back Cherie! Hey no problem, I'm long over due at your place of poetry, but i'll get there promise! Thanks very much for your warm words! MC
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