If I were to Choose

If I were to choose, I'd trace the stars,
To dance with dreams on moonlit beams.
With laughter woven into life's memoirs,
And love a thread in every seam.
I'd gather moments, pure and bright,
If I were to choose, I'd choose the light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Seeker Avatar
September 13, 2024 at 8:31 AM
An absolutely beautiful and captivating poem, congratulations on your top win!
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September 13, 2024 at 1:02 PM
Thank you my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Frank
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September 9, 2024 at 6:40 PM
Congratulations on a lovely poem
Mashina Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 9:14 PM
Thank you my dear friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Frank
Woods Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 12:47 PM
Amen and amen...congratulations on deserved win! Xo
Mashina Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 12:51 PM
Thank you my lovely friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Frank
Jones Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 11:28 PM
Delightful poem! Congratulations on your top win!
Mashina Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 11:53 PM
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed the poem, and I truly appreciate your kind words! Frank
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September 7, 2024 at 11:07 AM
what a lovely poem !
Mashina Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 11:19 AM
I'm so glad that my poem resonated with you, Frank
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September 3, 2024 at 11:53 PM
This poem beautifully captures a longing for a life filled with light and love. Its imagery of tracing stars and weaving laughter into life creates a vivid and uplifting vision. The consistent rhyme and simple yet evocative language make it both charming and reflective. Well done again Frank!....Yeyedo
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