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If I were to Choose

If I were to choose, I'd trace the stars, To dance with dreams on moonlit beams. With laughter woven into life's memoirs, And love a thread in every seam. I'd gather moments, pure and bright, If I were to choose, I'd choose the light.

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Date: 9/13/2024 8:31:00 AM
An absolutely beautiful and captivating poem, congratulations on your top win!
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Frank Mashina
Date: 9/13/2024 1:02:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Frank
Date: 9/9/2024 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations on a lovely poem
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Frank Mashina
Date: 9/9/2024 9:14:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Frank
Date: 9/9/2024 12:47:00 PM
Amen and amen...congratulations on deserved win! Xo
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Frank Mashina
Date: 9/9/2024 12:51:00 PM
Thank you my lovely friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Frank
Date: 9/7/2024 11:28:00 PM
Delightful poem! Congratulations on your top win!
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Frank Mashina
Date: 9/7/2024 11:53:00 PM
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed the poem, and I truly appreciate your kind words! Frank
Date: 9/7/2024 12:39:00 PM
Frank, congratulations on your superb write and win, I am absolutely thrilled for you, well done my friend. Danny
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Frank Mashina
Date: 9/7/2024 1:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Danny! Your kind words mean a lot to me. I'm truly grateful for your support and encouragement. It’s an honor to share this moment with friends like you. Appreciate it!, Frank
Date: 9/7/2024 11:07:00 AM
what a lovely poem !
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Frank Mashina
Date: 9/7/2024 11:19:00 AM
I'm so glad that my poem resonated with you, Frank
Date: 9/3/2024 11:53:00 PM
This poem beautifully captures a longing for a life filled with light and love. Its imagery of tracing stars and weaving laughter into life creates a vivid and uplifting vision. The consistent rhyme and simple yet evocative language make it both charming and reflective. Well done again Frank!....Yeyedo
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