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If I Were Spider Man

my mission to tie all loose ends ~ I work on the web, drop me a line 17 syllables Contest: If I were a Super Hero Sponsor: JCB Burl Placed 1st 30th Aug 2020

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Jack Horne

Date: 10/1/2020 7:53:00 AM

these are great - I find this form very difficult

Paul Callus
Date: 10/5/2020 2:38:00 PM

Thank you, Jack. The shorter a poem is, the harder it becomes to project all the thoughts which come to mind! Regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 9/23/2020 2:48:00 PM

Great job here Paul. Guess you really ar3e the Spider Man. Dropping you a line to say Congrats Big Time. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 9/24/2020 7:38:00 AM

Thank you for a pleasant visit, Judy :) God bless you, too. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/5/2020 1:05:00 AM

This is very clever Paul I work on the web, drop me a line - you would be spider man of the recent 21st century - great poem and many congrats on your wonderful win! Great imagination you have my friend. Warm regards and hugs, Jenny.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 4:14:00 AM

Thank you for the feedback and lovely comments, Jenny. You know how to lift up a man's spirit:) ~ Warm regards & Hugs my friend // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 9/3/2020 3:49:00 PM

Too cute Paul and so clever. Congrats. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 4:12:00 AM

Thank you, Judy. Blessings to you too. // paul

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/2/2020 9:07:00 PM

Congatulations Paul! Loved your Monoku Pangie xx

Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 4:08:00 AM

Thank you, Panagiota. Enjoy the weekend:) // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2020 10:23:00 AM

such clever word play Paul, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 2:59:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. Hope you are all keeping well..regards from all of us. Hugs // paul

Silent One

Date: 9/2/2020 9:26:00 AM

Ha! This is brilliant!!!!

Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 2:58:00 AM

Thank you for your spontaneous positive reaction S-1. Regards // paul

Elaine George

Date: 9/2/2020 2:14:00 AM

Good One Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 2:52:00 AM

Thank you Elaine. Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Regards // paul

Michael Tor

Date: 9/1/2020 4:53:00 PM

Congratulations Paul a well deserved win my friend. Like Andrea says very clever...

Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 2:52:00 AM

Thank you, Michael; much appreciated my friend. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2020 3:26:00 PM

this one is SUPER clever. One of my favorites on the list. Congrats, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 2:23:00 AM

You rock, Andrea!:) Thank you. Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2020 2:16:00 PM

Congrats on taking a first place, Paul! Love this monoku.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 1:57:00 AM

Thank you on both counts, dear Carolyn. Hope you are keeping well. Hugs // paul

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/1/2020 2:12:00 PM

Extremely clever, Paul. Superb monoku. A privilege to view it. Webs, warps and woofs. ~ Wolf

Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 1:56:00 AM

Thank you for your kindness and woofs, my friend:) Best regards // paul

Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/1/2020 8:34:00 AM

Hello Paul Your Monoku entry is truly a top winner. So clever + original in double meaning. Best wishes Brian

Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 1:52:00 AM

Thank you, Brian. Your visit here is most welcome. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2020 8:14:00 AM

- Congratulations you are a Super Hero, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 9/5/2020 1:46:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise:) Have a lovely weekend my friend! Hugs // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/1/2020 3:54:00 AM

Great one Paul! Well done :)

Paul Callus
Date: 9/4/2020 2:32:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi. Hope you're keeping well. egards // paul

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/31/2020 11:31:00 PM

Clever poetry, and it says so much..love it.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/4/2020 2:31:00 PM

Thank you Harry. You can be my judge anytime:) Regards // paul

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/31/2020 3:54:00 PM

Sending you a "line." So fun, Paul! Great double-entendre! Best wishes for the contest!

Paul Callus
Date: 9/4/2020 1:56:00 PM

Thank you for the feedback and wishes, Sam. Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/31/2020 3:01:00 PM

Very clever "web" pun, Paul:) I'll look for this poem on the Winners' List! Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 9/4/2020 1:50:00 PM

Thank you for the faith you showed in my on-liner, Carolyn. Hugs // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/31/2020 5:05:00 AM

Like the double meaning of web---all the best, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/3/2020 12:29:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. Best regards // paul

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/30/2020 7:44:00 PM

LOL, Paul, you can spin me a web, anytime!

Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2020 11:27:00 PM

Wow love your reaction, Michelle:) Spider Man at your service...spinning a web, but not a yarn!! Have a lovely week ahead....paul