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If I Were Spider Man

my mission to tie all loose ends ~ I work on the web, drop me a line


   

17 syllables
Contest: If I were a Super Hero
Sponsor: JCB Burl 
   Placed 1st
30th Aug 2020

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Jack Horne

October 1, 2020 at 7:53 AM

these are great - I find this form very difficult

Paul Callus

October 5, 2020 at 2:38 PM

Thank you, Jack. The shorter a poem is, the harder it becomes to project all the thoughts which come to mind! Regards // paul

Judy Ball

September 23, 2020 at 2:48 PM

Great job here Paul. Guess you really ar3e the Spider Man. Dropping you a line to say Congrats Big Time. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus

September 24, 2020 at 7:38 AM

Thank you for a pleasant visit, Judy :) God bless you, too. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

September 5, 2020 at 1:05 AM

This is very clever Paul I work on the web, drop me a line - you would be spider man of the recent 21st century - great poem and many congrats on your wonderful win! Great imagination you have my friend. Warm regards and hugs, Jenny.

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 4:14 AM

Thank you for the feedback and lovely comments, Jenny. You know how to lift up a man's spirit:) ~ Warm regards & Hugs my friend // paul

Judy Ball

September 3, 2020 at 3:49 PM

Too cute Paul and so clever. Congrats. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 4:12 AM

Thank you, Judy. Blessings to you too. // paul

Panagiota Romios

September 2, 2020 at 9:07 PM

Congatulations Paul! Loved your Monoku Pangie xx

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 4:08 AM

Thank you, Panagiota. Enjoy the weekend:) // paul

Jan Allison

September 2, 2020 at 10:23 AM

such clever word play Paul, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 2:59 AM

Thank you, Jan. Hope you are all keeping well..regards from all of us. Hugs // paul

Silent One

September 2, 2020 at 9:26 AM

Ha! This is brilliant!!!!

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 2:58 AM

Thank you for your spontaneous positive reaction S-1. Regards // paul

Elaine George

September 2, 2020 at 2:14 AM

Good One Paul.

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 2:52 AM

Thank you Elaine. Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Regards // paul

Michael Tor

September 1, 2020 at 4:53 PM

Congratulations Paul a well deserved win my friend. Like Andrea says very clever...

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 2:52 AM

Thank you, Michael; much appreciated my friend. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

September 1, 2020 at 3:26 PM

this one is SUPER clever. One of my favorites on the list. Congrats, Paul.

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 2:23 AM

You rock, Andrea!:) Thank you. Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

September 1, 2020 at 2:16 PM

Congrats on taking a first place, Paul! Love this monoku.

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 1:57 AM

Thank you on both counts, dear Carolyn. Hope you are keeping well. Hugs // paul

Gershon Wolf

September 1, 2020 at 2:12 PM

Extremely clever, Paul. Superb monoku. A privilege to view it. Webs, warps and woofs. ~ Wolf

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 1:56 AM

Thank you for your kindness and woofs, my friend:) Best regards // paul

Brian Sambourne

September 1, 2020 at 8:34 AM

Hello Paul Your Monoku entry is truly a top winner. So clever + original in double meaning. Best wishes Brian

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 1:52 AM

Thank you, Brian. Your visit here is most welcome. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 1, 2020 at 8:14 AM

- Congratulations you are a Super Hero, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

September 5, 2020 at 1:46 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise:) Have a lovely weekend my friend! Hugs // paul

Heidi Sands

September 1, 2020 at 3:54 AM

Great one Paul! Well done :)

Paul Callus

September 4, 2020 at 2:32 PM

Thank you, Heidi. Hope you're keeping well. egards // paul

Harry Horsman

August 31, 2020 at 11:31 PM

Clever poetry, and it says so much..love it.

Paul Callus

September 4, 2020 at 2:31 PM

Thank you Harry. You can be my judge anytime:) Regards // paul

Sam Kauffman

August 31, 2020 at 3:54 PM

Sending you a "line." So fun, Paul! Great double-entendre! Best wishes for the contest!

Paul Callus

September 4, 2020 at 1:56 PM

Thank you for the feedback and wishes, Sam. Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

August 31, 2020 at 3:01 PM

Very clever "web" pun, Paul:) I'll look for this poem on the Winners' List! Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus

September 4, 2020 at 1:50 PM

Thank you for the faith you showed in my on-liner, Carolyn. Hugs // paul

Vijay Pandit

August 31, 2020 at 5:05 AM

Like the double meaning of web---all the best, Paul.

Paul Callus

September 3, 2020 at 12:29 AM

Thank you, Vijay. Best regards // paul

Michelle Faulkner

August 30, 2020 at 7:44 PM

LOL, Paul, you can spin me a web, anytime!

Paul Callus

August 30, 2020 at 11:27 PM

Wow love your reaction, Michelle:) Spider Man at your service...spinning a web, but not a yarn!! Have a lovely week ahead....paul

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