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If I Were Looney

On the bus I pass by a building
We refer to as the looney bin
I can’t help but be looking

I see patients that aren’t locked in
They hang out catching a ray of sun
While smoking with an air of chagrin

They never look like they’re having fun
I think if I were in the looney ward
I’d want to escape the blah phenomenon

I’d want to pretend I won some big award
For being crazy happy with no reason
And I’d be laughing all day as my reward

They could accuse me of flaming treason
I wouldn’t care I’d be spreading christmas joy
No matter what the time or season

In the looney bin I’d whop it up like a real McCoy



AP: 3rd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Awtry Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 6:44 AM
love this idea! Might as well live it up and make a party out of it! ;)
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April 28, 2019 at 6:52 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, PS.
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