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If I Were a Seagull


Were I a seagull, I would glide so fine
   with V-shaped wings aflutter in the breeze,
      above the ocean's whitecap-wave design,
along with others, join with calls that please.


With V-shaped wings aflutter in the breeze,
   creating whirling patterns that unfold,
       along with others, join with calls that please-
squawks echoing, rebounding, loud and bold.

Creating whirling patterns that unfold,
   I'd mesmerize with movements of my wings-
      squawks echoing, rebounding loud and bold,
while hunting food amid my gatherings.

I'd mesmerize with movements of my wings
   above the ocean's whitecap-wave design,
      while hunting food amid my gatherings.
Were I a seagull, I would glide so fine.


January 24, 2021

Contest: If I Were A . . .
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose
Chosen: 3. If I Were A Seagull

Revised from a previous poem posted: 12/09/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 2/4/2021 12:58:00 PM
Dear Sandra, you make me wish to be a sea gull in another life. Beautifully penned, thank you for sharing this exquisite verse. Congrats on your win.
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