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If I Were a Plastic Bag-

If I Were a Plastic Bag… I would help shoppers carry their stuff. Anything: groceries, toys or powder puffs. I could help thrice, because I am tough. I like to; it is fun to see their stuff! Sometimes I wait for weeks in the dark, scrunched. Kept there unused for months crowded and hunched… I am not alone; we plastic bags are bunched. Waiting in the dark while the humans munch. I dream that one-day, soon I will fly up high. I will escape on the day that the wind blows by. A breath of fresh air will lift me into the sky. I will see the city's grandeur; then, I shall sigh. It seems like forever the days go slow. Up in a treetop it would not be so. I could just hang around beneath sun's glow. Watching travelers drive about on streets below. Freedom's dream, flying high, has not come to fruition. The life I lead in cabinets has become a mission. Somehow, now, based upon the economic condition. I just lay back in the dark and wait in submission. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 18, 2009

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Date: 12/20/2009 2:49:00 AM
I think you've managed to voice out a plastic bag's sentiments very nicely Dane Ann :) I sure am glad to see you back here :) ...I must also say that I have met a plastic bag that your would envy, there was actually one kite made out of a plastic bag that got stuck to our tree before ;) enjoy your weekend!
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Date: 12/20/2009 12:29:00 AM
Great personification Dane.Thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/19/2009 3:43:00 PM
This is plastic bag classic poetry.. good job in writing from the bag's point of view.. I have never read such a wonderful rendition ever.. u are a talented lady Dane Ann ... this is a prize unto itself... enjoyed ... thankxxx for commenting so kindly on my poetry tonight also... with such a fierce snowstorm today the computer and P.S. is a lifesaver.... blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 12/18/2009 1:35:00 PM
This is delightful. who would ever think that a plastic bag had feelings!! Well...now I do!! :) Love, Carrie ps...hope you are healing quickly, Dane Ann!! ~ :)
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Date: 12/18/2009 1:25:00 PM
look whos back to her old artful self. this is such a creative work. i tried to call but a certian friend gave me the wrong number. dont tell her i said so. i'll just have to call her back. love john
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Date: 12/18/2009 5:28:00 AM
This is one funny write, I loved the part about not being up in a tree top. I don't how many times I've spotted these bags located there. Enjoyed your unique and imaginative sense of humor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/18/2009 4:23:00 AM
That's one beautiful write...It made laugh and hold a tear in my eye... Thank you for sharing.. Farah
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Date: 12/18/2009 4:20:00 AM
Interesting take on the life of a plastic bag. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. I especially like the part about the flying of the bag(but in real life not great). Sara
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Date: 12/18/2009 4:17:00 AM
A thought provoking and deep poem, full of imagination. compliments of the season, my friend
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