If I Were a Dress

If I were a dress, 
I’d float in the air like a butterfly, 
I’d wrinkle and shimmer
As the breeze would stroke my fabric,    

If I were a dress, 
I would be fragile as flower blossoms,
My silken material would flow through fingers like a river, 
And every touch would feel like a rose petal,  

If I were a dress, 
I’d have a radiant glow,  
My  lavender shade would attire all eyes ,
I’d gleam illuminated by the sunset shin,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 10, 2015 at 4:21 PM
Zofia, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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December 15, 2015 at 12:40 PM
Thank you Linda for your warm comment, I hope to see you around Poetry Soup
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December 6, 2015 at 6:29 PM
Hi Zofia, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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December 15, 2015 at 12:47 PM
I want you to know how much I appreciate you helping me out. It is rare to find such kind poets. Zofia
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December 2, 2015 at 10:59 PM
Zofia, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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December 15, 2015 at 12:51 PM
Thank you for your kindness Skat, for being such a great friend and your positive attitude. Zofia
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December 2, 2015 at 6:59 PM
great zofia
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December 15, 2015 at 12:52 PM
Thank you
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 2:22 PM
such delightful imagery Zofia this is very beautifully written:-) hugs Jan xx
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December 15, 2015 at 1:15 PM
I would like to thank you for your feedback and comment. Zofia
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