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If I Were a Dress

If I were a dress, I’d float in the air like a butterfly, I’d wrinkle and shimmer As the breeze would stroke my fabric, If I were a dress, I would be fragile as flower blossoms, My silken material would flow through fingers like a river, And every touch would feel like a rose petal, If I were a dress, I’d have a radiant glow, My lavender shade would attire all eyes , I’d gleam illuminated by the sunset shin,

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Date: 12/10/2015 4:21:00 PM
Zofia, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Zofia Gostkowska
Date: 12/15/2015 12:40:00 PM
Thank you Linda for your warm comment, I hope to see you around Poetry Soup
Date: 12/6/2015 6:29:00 PM
Hi Zofia, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Zofia Gostkowska
Date: 12/15/2015 12:47:00 PM
I want you to know how much I appreciate you helping me out. It is rare to find such kind poets. Zofia
Date: 12/2/2015 10:59:00 PM
Zofia, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Zofia Gostkowska
Date: 12/15/2015 12:51:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Skat, for being such a great friend and your positive attitude. Zofia
Date: 12/2/2015 6:59:00 PM
great zofia
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Zofia Gostkowska
Date: 12/15/2015 12:52:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 12/2/2015 2:22:00 PM
such delightful imagery Zofia this is very beautifully written:-) hugs Jan xx
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Zofia Gostkowska
Date: 12/15/2015 1:15:00 PM
I would like to thank you for your feedback and comment. Zofia

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