If I Was a Tree

What would it be like if I were a tree
Just how different my life would be
Standing still for years on end
Perhaps it would drive me round the bend
Back and forth I’d sway in the breeze
Then in the winter my branches would freeze
In the autumn I would be naked and bare
But I’m just a tree so who’s going to care
I’ll attract all the birds when it turns to spring
They will sit on my branches and then start to sing
Building their houses they fly too and fro
Too bring up their young I watch how they grow
When it gets cold they’ll all fly away
The sign that its winter with a sky that is grey
Alone again not one single bird
The sound of the singing not to be heard
All the little animals have all hidden away
I’m stuck in the ground that’s where I will stay
I see the odd person who’s out for a jog
Then there are others out walking their dog
Then they will stop to let the dog pee
But why do they have to do it on me
Kids swing from my branches till they fall apart
If only they realised I do have a heart
Then there are others who give us the chop
Just to make furniture to sell in their shop
I wish I could talk then I could explain
That I do have feelings and I do feel the pain
So next time your out you’re bound to see me
Maybe you’ll realise I’m not just a tree

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/24/2017 4:40:00 PM
Very nice Tanya Like the line I wish I could talk then I could explain. Most people can talk but I myself find its hard to explain
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Date: 4/15/2015 6:26:00 PM
WOW... I LOVE IT TANYA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/15/2015 8:51:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup. Enjoyed the read; until the dog peed, Couldn't they see it was more than a tree. Much Love
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Date: 4/15/2015 7:16:00 AM
- I wish you Tanya and your first poem here at the P Soup welcome - Always nice with new "poet" friends - Good luck, looking forward to many more poems in the future - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/14/2015 6:18:00 PM
Tanya, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/13/2015 10:04:00 PM
Sounds like this tree wants to branch out to be other things. Fun read, great write.
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Date: 4/12/2015 10:10:00 PM
G'day Tanya... enjoyed your poem Tanya. We tend to take a tree for granted but as you explained, it is a living city providing shelter, food, and a home for many. Thak you Tanya - Lindsay
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:26:00 PM
Yikes, reminds me of Linoleum, seriously, sorry you feel this way. Thank you for sharing!
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