If I Told You the Truth, I'D Have You In Tears

So sad, they seem, the reasons I hide The Truth that's left unrevealed A thousand times my tongue has lied- In attempt to keep it all concealed

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Robin Davis

Date: 1/5/2014 1:55:00 PM

Chan The Man So much truth in so few words. I don't think you could ever lie. Well I hope you don't especially to me or I would be very sad. LOL Nice job with getting the reader to feel what is in your heart. Thanks for the fun and amazing comment on my Computerized People poem. Hugs and Love

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 1/6/2014 6:23:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sweet Pea :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/21/2013 7:33:00 PM

I am a big short form fan...you have mastered it I think..I see so much truth in your poems..BG

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/22/2013 7:44:00 AM

Thank you, Barbara; I'm also a big fan of short pieces. I'm not quite sure I've "mastered" it lol (but thank you for the confidence-boosting compliment), but I think I do have a pretty firm grasp. Thank you for stopping by and giving my little ditty a read and response; I appreciate the kind words :)