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If I Should Wake

Every night I try to sleep I lie awake tired and weak I dread waking the next day with fear it will end the same way.Then when I can see your face my life stops flowing as a disgrace my life blossoms like a flower praying together another hour.I bid farewell to you my friend. For the poem this is the end

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Skat A

Date: 5/5/2016 2:57:00 AM

Britt, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. --SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2016 10:52:00 AM

Britt, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 4/16/2013 4:32:00 PM

Britt, a deep poem. Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up here by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2013 1:20:00 PM

Britt, well written. - Welcome to P-Soup, have fun with writing, reading and comments here with us. - Wish you all the best. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)