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If I Never

If I never write another poem again Will you remember me All the parts of my heart I exposed The morsels of my soul The intricacies The pain My manufactured pieces of joy Humor Wisdom from a fools pen Stains dripped from a troubled mind I sit here with head in hand Looking at a blank page Fearing I have nothing left to say Coaxing my brain to respond Drip Drip A word A corresponding heart beat An image projected Displayed Choreographed Spinning Coming to life I wish you to reach out Take it in your hand Feel touch Smell live within the space Allow the idea to expand Grow beyond a page Put leaves on my trees Climb my branches Drink from my streams Add color to my rainbow Breathe through my lungs See through my looking glass For if I never write another poem again I can sigh and say It has all been worthwhile You heard my call Responded Understood Seen the previously unseen Walked along my landscapes Left a part of yourself Drank from my cup Sat at my table You my honored guests The one I will remember For you are the reason My pen drips and my heart smiles You help me remember To see To believe One word at a time Entry for PD's Free Verse Contest

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Skat A

Date: 9/18/2013 2:30:00 PM

nice win ............ luv ~SKAT~

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/13/2013 12:51:00 PM

What a heart-moving poem this is, Richard, one that I would have placed higher...:) And the title.......I love the title!! and a ps.....my grateful mention of your contest results! I am so honored.....thank you so much, and I hope I have done justice to Elaine's beautiful poem. What a unique contest to be inspired by our fellow poets! Thanks again!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/13/2013 10:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning place Richard xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/13/2013 9:26:00 AM

Richard, , , stopping by with hugs & smiles:-) xox (-: CONGRATULATIONS :) on your win. Enjoy my blog "You know where my heart is" when you have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15906&PoetID=18720 Always & Forever xox-Linda-xox

Richard D Seal

Date: 9/6/2013 6:18:00 PM

I have to say thank you first of all Rick, for sharing your call and allowing us to drink from your cup. The honour is ours indeed. A wonderful write and going straight to faves. Take care, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2013 6:47:00 PM

You just Mae my day with this comment Richard. You are a good guy and I appreciate you.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 8/31/2013 11:10:00 PM

Of course, we'll remember you Richard. Words have no expiry date- what you write lives on and once it's in our minds it is stored in its own compartment waiting for a rainy day to be retrieved again for the comfort and joy it brings. (but I do have the suspicion that you'll never run out of words. You may put a pause, only to begin again like a phoenix reborn). Well penned.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/31/2013 11:27:00 PM

Awww thanks Vicky, you honor me again.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/30/2013 10:59:00 PM

OK I will use "brilliant" twice, this is also great! to my favs!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/31/2013 11:31:00 PM

Hi Arthur, I appreciate the visits.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 8/28/2013 7:43:00 PM

Very deeply moving don't ever stop putting your feeling on to the written page your too good. Also thank you for your wisdom and sharing it with us. cheri

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/31/2013 11:33:00 PM

Thanks Cheri

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/28/2013 12:33:00 PM

Rick, you have explained in this amazing write the power of words! Your words have touched me more than you know and I hope you NEVER stop writing! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/28/2013 5:19:00 PM

Thanks Cecilia, I am honored you feel that way.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/28/2013 7:39:00 AM

Powerful, emotional poem. Everyone fears being forgotten but the rich tapestries you have woven with your wondrous words will always remain vibrant and beautiful.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/28/2013 7:43:00 AM

You are kind Monterey, thanks for your kind words.

Elai Cee

Date: 8/27/2013 6:53:00 PM

hi Richard, intentionally to visit u here and i need a little favor for you. im writing oration piece for the contest in our school. because i saw that ur honest commentator and i love ur write. hope u can help me to give ur advice and comments. ill give the links of my blog if this done. hope i can see ur comment there. thanks and God bless!---Elai

Elai Cee
Date: 8/28/2013 3:34:00 AM

ok i will thanks Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 7:26:00 PM

I would be happy too comment. Soup me with your blog.

Chris Boskovski

Date: 8/27/2013 6:31:00 PM

Very Beautiful and very powerful! The one fear I have is being forgotten! Very strong poem and a kind of sorrow covers the page, but it is a good kind of sorrow, not a sad one, but a powerful sorrow, with every single word that packs a heavy punch! Very good poem Richard, great job on this masterpiece of poetry!! :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 7:27:00 PM

Thanks Christopher.

Pat Roswell

Date: 8/27/2013 5:02:00 PM

amazing. been some time since i been on this site. came straight here for some reads. and this poem right here has a lot of heart.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 7:28:00 PM

Thanks Pat, nice to see you back.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/27/2013 12:25:00 PM

I hope never NEVER comes...I would miss your poems...and the inspiration you give...and the man behind the poems...the many different facets and shades that make you who you are. Keep writing, Richard....A very moving write....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2013 7:29:00 AM

Always???? You know that is 100 percent, right? I sure hope so...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 7:29:00 PM

Thanks Eileen, you always make my day.

Cherie Thomas

Date: 8/27/2013 11:53:00 AM

This is a favorite for sure, these words are truly touching love your poetry:0) cherie

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 7:30:00 PM

Aww thanks Cherie you are sweet.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/27/2013 11:52:00 AM

WOW! Richard this is excellent! Going in my favs! So glad I stopped by to read your work! Love, Kim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 7:34:00 PM

You honor me!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2013 9:14:00 AM

Yes, I am the one to remember this poem,

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 7:31:00 PM

Thanks Dr. Ram, I appreciate your kind words.

Red Fiery

Date: 8/27/2013 9:04:00 AM

I am so touched by these words...these lines are very captivating. Poetry is like a heartbeat...keep ur verses alive. You have a magical pen Richard !

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 7:37:00 PM

Thanks Red, so glad you connected with this piece. Appreciate you adding your thoughts.

Red Fiery
Date: 8/27/2013 9:13:00 AM

I have to mention something I really admired 'Put leaves on my trees Climb my branches Drink from my streams Add some part of you' Speechless

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/27/2013 8:12:00 AM

Yes. One never wants to actually stop writing or do anything that they love. But, if/when it does come to that, instead of sulking, we step back to reap what we have sown. Cherish the memories that came from doing what we love. That is, essentially, the intended legacy of humanity. Great work...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 7:33:00 PM

You make a good point Drake. Thanks for commenting.

Red Fiery

Date: 8/27/2013 7:45:00 AM

All your poems are amazing...I enjoy reading them , they inspire me and motivates me to write. You should never stop writing. The words are very pure here Richard ! Amazing write from an amazing writer. Cheers !

Red Fiery
Date: 8/27/2013 8:15:00 AM

Thank you Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 7:57:00 AM

Thanks Red, I see you are a biker. I like the new avatar, you look happy.