If I Need a Friend Maybe Run Acrostic

(from Simon & Garfunkle's "Bridge Over Troubled Water)

If is such a weak word, it branches, crackling under foot.
You know it, but you use it to sing me into sleep, never suspecting
need dangles down upon my head, tickling and wrapping
a comforting hand upon my qualms. If lets you back out
friend, but you wait more patient than the coming of snow.

I'm me, its enough. My ifs and ands are more numerous than leaves
sailing as I kick them about. Leaves don't crackle, they weep
right into the concrete meaning of our existence. Uncertain moment
behind a closed door.  Certain moment under a bed of dirt
like hugs from relatives you've never met before.

A friend though eclipses the daylight, becomes lightning to
bridge over or explode into laughter, where do I put them?
Over one shoulder like cast spilled salts? That seems sly,
troubled. Can I weave them together and have life?
Water offers that but slips away, how then bugs? Ducks?

I slip into water as easily as ifs are thrown into the winds.
Will my hair blow like an arrow toward fate or does chance
ease into icicles. They're weapons, ifs, ands, buts, maybes.
Your friendship is such, dressing and undressing like fashion
minds the sales racks. Still though, I'm glad that you and ifs are here.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/8/2014 6:13:00 PM
Here is a poem of yours I never saw before. I believe I recall this contest and don't even remember it being judged! I enjoyed your perspective of the theme. thanks for finally judging your contest and for my win!!
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Date: 3/15/2014 8:33:00 AM
Great work written for the contest...I do like the words to the song..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/11/2014 9:52:00 AM
Your poem is amazing Sheri, , enjoying this fun verse again. CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/14/2014 6:08:00 PM
Thanks so much SKAT_A!
Date: 3/6/2014 6:45:00 PM
Sheri, I love this style, and how you did it... I had to double read the poem. Hold on! OKAY! Is this for a contest. I know you are very creative. I like how the black bold letters stand out alone. A poem and acrostic of its own... LINDA
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/14/2014 6:08:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda!
Date: 3/3/2014 7:12:00 PM
I enjoyed this novel take on the meaning of the song, it's creative! Light & Love
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/14/2014 6:08:00 PM
Thanks very much Debbie!
Date: 3/3/2014 3:48:00 PM
The highlighted words add to the effect. Well done.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/3/2014 4:08:00 PM
Thanks much Richard
Date: 3/3/2014 3:28:00 PM
Nicely done Sheri. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/3/2014 4:08:00 PM
Happy to Joyce, thanks for the return read!
Date: 3/1/2014 6:09:00 PM
Nice... Good work... Verlena
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/3/2014 4:09:00 PM
Thank you much Verlena
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