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If I Knew Where I Was Going

If I knew where to go, How to get there, and know What to do when I got there, How to put on the show… If I knew my direction And quite without vexation I could adhere to the main road And not have mention That I might not belong here That my heart could not quite bear If this road were a short one With a dead end; I would care. For without all the side trips, And without many small blips, Could my clearing have sunlight? Or bright April rain drips? I think that it’s better, If a little bit wetter, That I take grassy track roads In a car that might clatter If I knew where to go, How to get there, and know What to do when I got there, Well… I think I’d say no.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/27/2009 7:53:00 AM
Why not? the missing adventure laden with surprise ... the missing excitement of unknown romance? Great poetry anyhow ... love you more
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Date: 5/23/2009 5:02:00 PM
Hi Carolyn! Not sure how this all works yet, or how to get back to you, but this seems most logical so i'm giving it a go! Thanks so much for taking an interest! I must sound sooooo miserable, but I'm really not! The poems just seem to come out that way... yeah, I guess that is the conclusion I reached, I was generally thinking about the future, and decided there was something of adventure in not knowing, and i liked it. I'd love to read some of your poems!
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:36:00 PM
Very intriguing write, Emma. You leave the reader curious as to why you would "say no." Could it be that the journey is more exciting than reaching the destination?
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