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If I Have Time

If I have the time I’ll clean the kitchen then tidy round the rest of the house, I’m due to see the vet with my pet mouse ... Ted’s lost his fur and he can’t stop itch’in! My little pet mouse Ted I just adore I’ve had him since I was a small child, alas his itchy skin is driving him wild - he’s shedding fur all over the floor! I carry Ted in his cage when I visit the vet and Ted plays happily on his small wheel, Vet’s hand enters the cage - he emits a squeal when he gets bitten by my traumatised pet! I mop up his blood, then hold Ted in my hand as the vet examines his scaly red skin, He pokes and prods much to Ted’s chagrin - if he can be cured it would be so grand! Vet gives Ted a shot and applies some cream then presents me with an enormous bill, the medication works well, Ted’s no longer ill and his fur’s grown back just like a dream! If You Have the Time for an Enclosed Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 12/23/19
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Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 2:19 PM
what a fun poem this was, Jan. So glad you could take the challenge and be on the winner list. Congratulations.
Y. Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 11:56 AM
Hi Jan, I’m just coming back to say congrats on a well deserved win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Kitchin Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 5:40 AM
Jan, congratulations on your placement with your well penned, clever and entertaining poem!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 1:32 AM
A belated POTD Jan. Time got away from me over the holiday. I loved this. Congratulations! I am happy you had your son home for Christmas! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 2:12 PM
Thanks Connie, its so wonderful having him home for so long:-) Hope you had a super time with the grandchildren, Happy new Year to you all:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 8:54 AM
Hi Jan, This is such a good take on the contest theme. Nice rhymes and content. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 2:11 PM
thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 1:12 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Time, where does it all go??? I need 1 or 2 more days to a week & I would be fine. Happy New Year 2020...........
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 2:12 PM
thanks so much Paula and happy new year to you too:-) hugs Jan xx
Romios Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 11:00 AM
Belated wishes Jan~ on this charming POTD. Panagiota
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 11:05 AM
Thanks Panagiota, I lost my muse didn't write for a month but now I am back and delighted to get potd:-) hugs Janx
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations Jan on been awarded POTD for this unique write. Really lovely! Blessings, Jennifer.
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 11:04 AM
thanks Jennifer:-) hugs Jan x
Messina Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 5:28 AM
Sorry I missed this clever poem.. Congratulations, Jan on POTD Hugs // Charlie
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 6:00 AM
Thanks so much Charlie, I lost my muse for a month so was delighted to come back and get POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Salehi Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 1:53 AM
Like always... Lovely... Congratulations on POTD.
Allison Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 8:09 AM
Thanks so much Pash my sweet friend, seasons greetings to you and your family and sending my best wishes for the new year:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 1:53 PM
- Congratulations, with a great p.o.t.d., Jan :) - Glad to see you back :) - GL in the contest :) - Marry Christmas // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 3:51 PM
Thanks so much my sweet friend, I'm hoping my muse is back to stay:-) Hope you had a wonderful day:-) hugs Jan xx
Adams Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 10:38 AM
Well done Jan, as always and congrats!........pat
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Thanks so much Pat:-) Happy Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
Pandit Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Congrats on poem of the day, Jan. Your poem is so rooted in real life (even when you say it is fiction). Excellent write!
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Thanks so much Vijay, pure poetic licence of course:-) Happy Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
Doll Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 10:22 AM
Ted has a good caretaker and love. Congratulations on POTD, Jan. Merry Christmas -Warren
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Glad its just fiction Warren:-) Happy Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on POTD!! Merry Christmas!!
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 4:17 PM
Thanks so much Eve for the congratulations and for the lovely book!:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations on POTD Sis!! Merry Christmas!!
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 4:18 PM
Thanks so much Bobby I am delighted especially after my muse disappeared for a month:-) hugs jan xx
Gondolf Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 7:12 AM
Congrats on POTD for this fun poem, Jan. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Hugs, john
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Thanks so much John, Season's greetings to you and your family:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 6:29 AM
Congratulations on POTD Jan!
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 4:20 PM
I'm stunned and delighted - so glad to be back my friend:-) Season's greetings to you and your family:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 2:55 AM
This is a sweet tale for Christmas Jan. I wrote an enclosed rhyme for this contest then realized it had to begin with her line so I entered it in another contest. I hope you are enjoying the holidays. My little granddaughters will arrive Xmas night and stay for 4 days, I can't wait. Best wishes for a wonderful holiday. Mele Kalikimaka! : ) xxoo
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Oh Connie I am so delighted you have your family with you again for Christmas I can imagine the joy at you being together again:-) My son is home for 3 weeks, that's my Christmas gift! Am hoping my muse is back to stay!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 2:26 AM
A nice present for you Jan, POTD honours. Merry Christmas. Tom
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 4:24 PM
I'm delighted Tom!!!:-) Hope you had a wonderful time with the family:-) hugs Jan xx
Theraven Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 10:53 PM
Merry Christmas Jan & cute rodent mouse. -Richard
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Thanks so much Richard:-) Seasons greetings:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 8:08 PM
So glad to read of the happy ending, Jan! And even gladder to see you back posting poems. Just in time for Xmas! Welcome back! Merry Xmas to you! Your friend, Gershon
Wolf Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 11:04 AM
Come back to P.S., and get the Comeback Award! Well-deserved, Jan! Congrats, gw
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 5:21 PM
thanks so much GW, my pen ran dry for a month I had no desire to write or even log on the site - getting POTD has given me a massive boost:-) hugs Jan xx Season's greetings to you and your family:-)
Bauer Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 1:45 PM
Hey Jan! You've done an amazing job with a rhyme scheme that usually sounds very forced to me. I enjoyed your poem very much, though. ~ Have a wonderful holiday...
Allison Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 2:18 PM
Hi Ilene it was a challenge especially as my muse left me for a month, hopefully am back for good now:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 10:11 AM
Your muse returned with a classic. Well done, Jan! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 2:18 PM
Thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 8:55 AM
Poor little Ted. Glad the cream worked and he didn't end up dead. Your humor and you have been missed. When I get back lets start a limerick collaboration with others who wish to join. It's been a while since we've opened the door for one. Topic of your choice.
Kitchin Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 6:27 AM
I would love that!
Allison Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 12:18 PM
oh yes a limerick collab would be fun!:-) hugs jan xx
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