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If I Ever Knew

If I ever knew this day would come when my muse stops showing up and words stop flowing through, I would have breezed upon each chapter all these breaths l feel for you. If I ever knew our bench would once be empty, Creases vanish from my coat Our peach tree lies unaccompanied , and Spring-gardens will turn cold. If I ever knew a night would come where I stopped counting stars in the jazzy sky so blue ... I would have stopped the time in yester's arms, and whispered , I love you.

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Jai Bankson

Date: 3/21/2016 4:57:00 AM

Great imagery

Funom Makama

Date: 12/17/2015 3:52:00 AM

lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/7/2015 12:37:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem, Charmaine. Such precious sentiments.. you have a special way with words. I really like these lines in particular: "I would have breezed upon each chapter all these breaths I feel for you." Always, Laura

Francis Osho

Date: 12/1/2015 9:16:00 AM

aahaaa

Red Barchettadrive

Date: 11/22/2015 3:16:00 AM

I love your woulda, shoulda, coulda poem CC! Jazzy sky stands out to me. (Poor, poor Peach tree) :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 11/21/2015 7:38:00 PM

Prophesy is often an Art that saddens the heart Charma, it is better not to rob the future of it's rewards and punishments, it's suspense and justice...no other Poetess speaks of her heart the way you do. Your muse is whispering for you still my Lady Hawk...J.A.B.

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/21/2015 4:48:00 PM

Three years old wow. And this piece reminds me of myself. My last piece was written while watching someone who has a spell on me. I saw her yesterday

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/20/2015 8:41:00 PM

This is not very fair, I mean, you brought tears to my eyes with this, I am at a loss for words, I just loved this!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2015 7:54:00 PM

simply gorgeous, Charma. The name Charma is for utterly CHARMING!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/20/2015 4:05:00 PM

So pleased your muse has returned with a flourish, Charm! In life we must grab each moment as it comes, otherwise tomorrow could be too late. Love the last two lines. ~ Regards // paul

Eric Boddie

Date: 11/20/2015 9:51:00 AM

if I ever knew....a Beautiful muse quite like you....who has the words to spark something new....from my pen that has value too....then I would never have to pursue....a reason to write for you are a dream come true....this is Beautifully sad Charmaine.....great job....;)

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/20/2015 10:28:00 AM

Tnks so much for reading.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/19/2015 2:42:00 PM

If I ever knew....I would have stopped the time in yester's arms and whispered I love you....that has to be the line of the year. So romantic. A wish to stop time, to embrace that moment, to cherish, and bask in its beauty....a fave

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/19/2015 3:04:00 PM

That is a beautiful comment.Tnks so much for the fave.