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If I Didn'T Think What I Think, Here's What I'D Think

If I didn't think what I think...here's what I'd think.... I think I am a product of my raising. Destined to be no better or no worse. I'd think there is no reaping nor no justice. I'd think fun is life and life is good. And love don't live on my street no more. Quarrelling and strife were the crux of life. Thinking backwards is not that easy thinking forward is harder still.... Tomorrow is now until I close my eyes that moment is eternity.... My quiet place behind my eyes. Contest sponsor: Nancy Jones 8/29/2012

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Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/10/2012 10:01:00 AM

good one! peace all over :) good luck

Chipepo Lwele

Date: 9/8/2012 1:40:00 PM

Thank you for your comment.This one is terrific.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/5/2012 10:50:00 PM

I like the way you worded this,,,,, nice ;}

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/31/2012 4:50:00 AM

a fantastic expressive poem for this challenge .. think many can relate to your lines Doris .. best wishes luv ..I am hanging in best I can .. my hands r swollen from rhumatoid arthritis and unless it subsides cannot get new bionic fingers set for October..seeing another specialist 9/14 to be poked and prodded .. oh..

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/29/2012 6:12:00 PM

This is not an easy contest to submit a poem. However, your entry appears to be a formidable one.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/29/2012 3:38:00 PM

This is a lovely write of your thoughts...or actually thoughts you would have if you didn't think what you think! This is an awesome compilation of thoughts, a wondrous poem! Great Work!!