If I Could Paint

If I could paint I would paint a kiss between our lips as your arms lift me slightly to dawn in your eyes If I could paint I would paint my emotion through mist on your window - pane I would write my name in hope you'd think of me with each pitter-patter of first autumn rain If I could paint I would paint a muse who is never distant Nor She a night mistress But a muse which dwells in your soul, mind and heart A muse which lives in your shadow which travels the distances and is never apart . If I could paint I would paint a bridge between the river and I I would paint our silhouettes between scintilla stars and a mid~ twilightt sky If I could paint I would paint this dark world as beautiful as you I'd splash my brush in a palette of pastels Of hues'early blossoms which bloom sweet jasmine blues

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/27/2015 7:57:00 AM
Each time you write you paint a beautiful picture.
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:47:00 PM
Oh this is what I am looking for, I love this poem for it also defines art! I am still a teenager but I can feel the longing on this poem, I wish to read more of your poetry. -whispering plants
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Date: 11/10/2014 3:59:00 PM
McWow Charmaine. Please learn to paint, pretty please. Just imagine what we'd see. Van Who? - James :) always :)
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Date: 11/10/2014 3:35:00 PM
And THIS is why I love art...ahh, the simple pleasures of the fingerpaint. Delicious piece.
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Date: 11/10/2014 6:43:00 AM
What a beauty this is Charma, absolutely enjoyed reading this masterpiece :) xx Wilma
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Date: 11/10/2014 5:16:00 AM
A masterpiece of Rebrand have you painted, dear Charmaine!
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Date: 11/9/2014 1:27:00 PM
What a great piece of art you have painted.
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Date: 11/9/2014 11:30:00 AM
Such a sweet n captivating write Charmaine! Loved much it's perfect my friend!
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Date: 11/9/2014 4:14:00 AM
Some people paint with a brush...others with a pen...you use the latter!! Beautiful all along, but I'm particularly touched by the last half a dozen lines. Once again...a 7 rating! // paul
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Date: 11/9/2014 3:07:00 AM
Your artistry is undeniable! Lovely piece Charmaine.
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Date: 11/8/2014 11:00:00 PM
a touching truly golden piece of writing charmaine excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 11/8/2014 7:35:00 PM
There is nothing "light" about this poem. Every time I finished reading one of your masterpieces. I feel like I need to write something epic. :)
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:32:00 PM
How beautiful Charma. I love the line I would paint my emotion through mist on your window - pane ...you painted a picture we all would like to see...hugs Tim
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Date: 11/8/2014 3:51:00 PM
This is so very lovely Charmaine ! I'm quite really overcome !
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