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If I Could Go Back - Collaboration

As I'm looking through my window 
And I start to l look around
All the snow has melted 
I see toys left on the ground
 
A basket ball, a whiffle ball 
A glove and baseball bat 
A dirty lone blue mitten 
And a cotton ball wool hat
 
Candy wrappers and soda caps 
And a witches old corn broom 
And underneath the swing set 
Was a busted red balloon
 
Footsteps from the children 
Left imprinted in the dirt 
And in the leafless branchy bush 
Was a little boys lost shirt
 
Those times when we were children 
Sometimes bad and sometimes good 
I'd go back there in a heartbeat 
If I thought that I just could
 
A dirty lone blue mitten 
And a cotton ball wool hat 
A basket ball, a whiffle ball
A glove and a baseball bat
 
And underneath the swing set 
Was a busted red balloon 
Candy wrappers and soda caps 
And a witches old corn broom
 
And in the leafless branchy bush 
Was a little boys lost shirt 
Footsteps from the children 
Left imprinted in the dirt

The child in me hasn’t grown up  
Wants even now to play in snow
Make footprints alongside children’s
If in those times back I could go

Those times when we were children 
Sometimes bad and sometimes good 
I'd go back there in a heartbeat 
If I thought that I just could

August 17, 2018
Contest : Add a stanza to my poem
Sponsored by : Charles Messina
(Added stanza is in bold)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/29/2018 4:14:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/29/2018 11:31:00 PM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 8/28/2018 3:08:00 PM
Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Subimal...Congratulations on your win!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/29/2018 12:08:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 8/28/2018 7:47:00 AM
Subimal, I really loved the stanza you added to my poem. Like so many others it seems to be a perfect fit. The child in us will always remain my friend. Thank you for entering my contest and Congratulations on your high win in my contest. All the best...Charlie
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/29/2018 12:08:00 AM
Thank you, Charles for the placement. It was a pelasure entering your contest.
Date: 8/17/2018 8:20:00 AM
a lovely addition to the poem Subimal it fits in so well with the flow of the original poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/19/2018 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, Jan for your visit and appreciation.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/19/2018 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, Jan for your visit and appreciation.

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