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If I Could Go Back - Collaboration

As I'm looking through my window And I start to l look around All the snow has melted I see toys left on the ground A basket ball, a whiffle ball A glove and baseball bat A dirty lone blue mitten And a cotton ball wool hat Candy wrappers and soda caps And a witches old corn broom And underneath the swing set Was a busted red balloon Footsteps from the children Left imprinted in the dirt And in the leafless branchy bush Was a little boys lost shirt Those times when we were children Sometimes bad and sometimes good I'd go back there in a heartbeat If I thought that I just could A dirty lone blue mitten And a cotton ball wool hat A basket ball, a whiffle ball A glove and a baseball bat And underneath the swing set Was a busted red balloon Candy wrappers and soda caps And a witches old corn broom And in the leafless branchy bush Was a little boys lost shirt Footsteps from the children Left imprinted in the dirt Those times when we were children Sometimes bad and sometimes good I'd go back there in a heartbeat If I thought that I just could If I could go back to that time I'd tell them one by one Learn to listen to the music Before the song is done 8-9-2018 For Charles Messina's contest If I Could Go Back- Collaboration

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Date: 8/29/2018 4:12:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/29/2018 4:33:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 8/28/2018 3:06:00 PM
Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Larry...Congratulations on your win!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/29/2018 4:32:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 8/28/2018 7:34:00 AM
Larry, I love the stanza you added to my poem. I couldn't have said it any better. Thank you for entering my contest so much appreciated. Congratulations on your win. All the best...Charlie
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/28/2018 10:06:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie. It was a pleasure to participate and to place in your contest.
Date: 8/12/2018 11:00:00 PM
Aw! This poem has a nostalgic sweetness rarely penned, but you did. It is a wow for me.
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