If I Could Change the World

Changing the world just seems so much bigger than me, it seems larger than just a thought or decision I could make, but I know deep down there is a strong vision I really see, taking a stand changing foster home rules for the children’s sake. Innocent children so timid when leaving with new foster parents, they are frightened and apprehensive for such a new exchange, they’ve already been abandoned once before with scary variants, now having to leave when unknown people who are strange. I’ve volunteered at a foster home and before and my eyes I saw, young babies and toddlers seem ready to find a reliable home, playing blocks, I realized there needs to be a change of the law, better edification to the parents, it’s possible their duties are unknown. I’ve seen these sweethearts leave excited and come back scared, I’d wish to teach these parents how serious are the responsibilities, it may not be that they couldn’t love them or that they never cared, but maybe there was maltreatment and realized in not good safety. If I could change the world I would make sure homes were safe, much better background checks so no abuse would be found, better education to raise a child without frustration and haste, hopefully these blameless kids would grow to be secure and profound. I’m not implying they will grow up to be complicated and not bright, I would pass legislature to transform the system for more deserving rights. If I Could Change The World Contest Sponsor: Becca Teagan Date Written: July 24, 2016

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Date: 8/9/2016 12:52:00 AM
Laura I really liked this poem... this is an area in life that really needs to be improved! Thank you for sharing. Sorry it took so long for me to get here to comment! Busy busy... hope you're well. Hugsies :)
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Date: 7/31/2016 6:27:00 PM
Congrats Laura to win. Hugs
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Date: 7/31/2016 11:30:00 AM
Congrats 1st xxxxxxxxxxx
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Date: 7/31/2016 10:20:00 AM
Hi Laura, I agree we must make a better world for "our" children. Well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved- 7:-) Alexis
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