If I Could Change the World

If I could change the world,
i would resurrect the humanity
humanity towards indigents
man would be rich by heart not wealth
wealth towards charity
money would flow not filled in greedy cupboard,
if I could change the world,

Real democracy with all human rights
right towards freedom
no limitations but absolute freedom
freedom towards sky
empty would be cages and freely flying birds,
if I could change the world,

I would change every heart's attitude
attitude towards life
everyone could show their gratitude
gratitude towards god
No more complaints, as pain would be conquered
if I could change the world,

best creation of god would be respected
respect towards women
be it a strange, mother, wife, daughter
empathy towards all
eradicated immoral deeds which recurred,
if I could change the world,

nations will not be divided by borders
border towards bonding
world would be a family with one vision
vision towards peace
there would be no chance of world war third,
if I could change the world...



Entered Contest: If you could be change the world
Date : 04/09/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/1/2016 8:43:00 AM
Enjoying this one again.....skat
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Date: 5/7/2016 7:29:00 PM
It sounds like a world worth aspiring too.
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Date: 5/6/2016 4:31:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win Deepak.. wonderful pen!
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Deepak A.
Date: 5/6/2016 4:47:00 AM
Thanks a lot Upma :)
Date: 5/6/2016 1:58:00 AM
Deepak.... Great win... Skat
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Deepak A.
Date: 5/6/2016 2:06:00 AM
Thanks Skat :) :)
Date: 5/5/2016 3:08:00 PM
Very well written...Congratulations on your win!
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Deepak A.
Date: 5/6/2016 2:05:00 AM
Thanks Meenakshi :)
Date: 4/9/2016 10:15:00 AM
Beautiful sentiments Deepak. I wish you could change the world too! Good luck and peace my friend:)
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Deepak A.
Date: 4/9/2016 10:49:00 AM
Thanks Daniel :)
Date: 4/9/2016 6:43:00 AM
wonderful words indeed Deepak - let's hope one day it all comes true:-) hugs jan xx
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Deepak A.
Date: 4/9/2016 10:50:00 AM
Thanks Jan
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