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If I Could Change the World

If I could change the world, There would be world peace, No one would fight, Differences accepted, Everyone be unique. No more cussing, No more hate, Only just alot of LOVE!! Everyone would be friends, All until the end, A different world. A life filled with hope, A life filled with love. A life to enjoy. There would still be imperfection, Mistakes make us who we are. We will learn and embrace them. An angelic world, A fun world, Nobody would be in pain. No more death, No more grief. Be who you are. Embrace your aptitudes, Be kind to others, IF I COULD CHANGE THE WORLD, THERE WOULD BE WORLD PEACE! A. BROTHWELL

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 2/5/2019 6:01:00 PM

So right. If we would just take a moment and really love on another they world would drastically change.

Frank Sheehan

Date: 2/1/2019 7:16:00 PM

Great write. It conveys a very powerful message. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/25/2019 1:36:00 AM

Abigail, welcome to Poetry Soup. I think you can, this poem is a great start. All of the uplifting, positive, let's do it this way poems like this do change the world for the better. This is one of those. The part I preach all the time is this part: " No more hate, Only just alot of LOVE!!" Love is the key, I feel it as well as I feel your poem.