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If I Could Afford a Dream

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I’ll go to some faraway place, On a lovely, isolated beach, at sunset, And watch the fiery solar ball Disappear over the limitless horizon. Look, the waves are rhythmically opalescent, The azure billows changing to carmine red And then to misty white as the foam Dissolve upon the fine citron sand. I’d lay myself upon a comfy hammock, Watch baby turtles swim in shallow sea, Or feel the saliferous sweet breeze Waft leisurely over the windblown dunes. Perhaps I’d languidly sway myself into a divine nap Until the sacred drums resonate with native music. The smell of finely cooked paella chicken Would whiff into my nostrils. Time to eat. I wake and fry a couple of eggs In my forlorn, unkempt kitchen. I can only afford a dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/9/2021 12:43:00 AM
Beautiful Victor, one thing that’s affordable by all is the dreams we go to when the night falls… Belle
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Date: 7/5/2021 10:28:00 PM
This write sounds so nice I love the idea of swinging in a hammock watching turtles in some exotic faraway place...Delice
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Date: 7/5/2021 2:27:00 PM
I love this. it sounds like MY kind of dream, Victor!! Boy, it's hard getting to old comments. I will never catch up here.
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Date: 7/5/2021 12:51:00 PM
Hello Victor, this is a beautiful dream. I love the sunsets. No matter where they are. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 7/5/2021 11:54:00 AM
Dreams can so worthwhile! Especially when they are as lovely as yours, Victor. I truly enjoyed your rhythmically opalescent waves that changed to carmine red. Hugs.
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Date: 7/5/2021 11:07:00 AM
When we follow our goals, we are not only feeding our souls, but we are also helping to promote our values in life. It is no accident that your great poem Victor has such a powerful emotional impact; it provides a great deal of stability in the middle of all the rush and bustle.
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Date: 7/5/2021 7:01:00 AM
A dream is all some can afford. Nice dream.
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Date: 7/5/2021 4:41:00 AM
Loved your dream, victor. So nice to leave the ordinary--dream or not.
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Date: 7/5/2021 2:49:00 AM
What an anticlimax! Make this dream real, Victor!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/5/2021 3:29:00 AM
Can't afford it!!!
Date: 7/5/2021 2:11:00 AM
Such a sweet dream Victor, I love your poem. It carried me away into your beautiful imagery of sweet and beautiful peace.
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Date: 7/5/2021 12:55:00 AM
We are lucky we can afford a dream! A life sustaining sweet feeling! Dreams nurture the soul and widens the scope of thoughts in Life.. Your poetry is of great meaning, Victor! It creates a sense of harmony in a chaotic Life.. Stay happy in the wonders of your poetry.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 7/5/2021 12:09:00 AM
Nicely done Victor. Sometimes the dream is better than the reality anyway. As always this is beautifully written. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/4/2021 11:07:00 PM
Its nice to dream, it makes us feel good if only for a short while. Tom
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Date: 7/4/2021 10:21:00 PM
What a delightful read Victor ~ if only... hoping you are well my friend, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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