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If I Can Fool You

If I could fool you, I surely would You’d be mine, your beauty understood I would fool you that my heart is sublime I would give you red roses every day To fool you into loving me I would kiss you softly on the lips Sweetly I shall whisper have I fooled you yet? I would hold you hand on seashore walks Enchanting your eyes with my fables and talks Every word would be crafted so So that I may be certain I fooled you so In the dusk, on a moonlit night Candles flicker upon our evening meal As I plan and deceive your heart to steal Once its captured, and your in my arms I would smile so brightly You being my prize and charm I know for sure you will entice me still And with a kiss right upon my lips You will laugh and dance and toss me a kiss With a question I already knew long ago You will ask me Who fooled who? Notes, This was inspired by Eileen Manassian Ghali, and her poem "I'm not fooled"

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/6/2015 10:33:00 AM

I see this was a poem of the day. An excellent choice.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/9/2015 9:38:00 PM

Thanks Richard! Hope you feeling better!

Meg Anderson

Date: 12/21/2014 4:12:00 PM

Arthur, Wow I randomly came upon this write and was blown away! Passionately written with deep emotions! So filled with much romance. Love it! Its a 7! Meg

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/21/2014 5:21:00 PM

You are so kind! Hugs!

Zakhe Michael Mcunu

Date: 8/23/2014 4:29:00 AM

this is really master piece maybe im also fooled by your words that gives hope to my long dead heart. keep up the great work ...

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/31/2014 6:42:00 PM

Thanks Zakhe glad you enjoyed!!!

John Rey Canon

Date: 8/4/2014 12:52:00 AM

You always put me into the scene reading your poems. I just love this one.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2014 6:56:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words John

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/31/2014 10:19:00 AM

A silver tongue that flows by way of a pen! A great one my friend and chosen for poem of the day, bravo!!! Catching up on commenting to the sinners in this feature. I simply missed it for days and days...

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2014 6:55:00 PM

Thank you Robert, I am doing some catching up myself!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/28/2014 8:14:00 AM

Hey!!! You got to be poem of the day with this write! ;) Can I bask in some of the glory as it WAS due to MY inspiring poem! HA HA! Hugs..and congrats!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2014 6:54:00 PM

Thanks Eileen, and yes you sure can, your beauty outshines all !!!!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/27/2014 4:07:00 PM

A very nice poem. I would never try to to fool anyone, but that's just me. Thaks for sharing... Lucilla

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2014 6:54:00 PM

Thanks Lucilla, I didn't mean it literally, I meant quite the opposite!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/25/2014 4:19:00 PM

Well well sweetheart, Poem of The Day, Way to go! Glad I got back from rehab to read this one...again ;)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2014 6:52:00 PM

Thank Cas , Lets have a drink and celebrate!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/25/2014 1:54:00 PM

- I have not noticed this "Poem of the Day" page before ...... I have been fooled :) - Well done, Arthur !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2014 6:51:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise, I was unaware as well!

Tim Smith

Date: 7/25/2014 4:21:00 AM

Hey you are the poem of the day...no fooling

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2014 6:51:00 PM

And Fool of the year!

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/24/2014 5:26:00 PM

Very well done, Arthur. There is much truth to this one. And you have captured the honesty of one that feels it necessary to deceive in order to win the love of another. Enjoyed it my friend.... Robert.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/24/2014 8:53:00 PM

Thanks Robert, when we fall in love we are all fools, but in a very good way!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/24/2014 12:05:00 PM

I would totally let you fool me sweetheart ;) it would be worth it. great poem my friend, I had missed you this week with my internet down but I am back and happy to read you. xox

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/24/2014 8:52:00 PM

Nice to see you back from rehab, how about some fooling around!!! Thanks Cas!!!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/24/2014 6:00:00 AM

Oh, Arthur..... you know what a romantic fool I am. This is like throwing me candy....... ;-) I'm touched to the core and what's more...... I'm going to fav this beauty of yours. Not because its inpiration came from my silly rant, though I'm glowing with that knowledge, but because it is gentle and sweet.....Romance at its best with a touch of passion about to bloom. Thanks for being a sweetheart.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/24/2014 8:49:00 PM

Oh I was sure you would like this one , I was smiling as the idea formed in my mind

Paul Callus

Date: 7/24/2014 2:14:00 AM

You have been well inspired, my friend! I know from experience that when we fool others we are also fooling ourselves! // paul

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/24/2014 8:49:00 PM

Thanks Paul

Tim Smith

Date: 7/23/2014 11:45:00 PM

So romantic..... Tomorrow is ladies night...hmmm

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/23/2014 11:51:00 PM

Thanks Tim, coming from you, its a real complement because you are sure good at that style, and yes tomorrow is scarey, I have no idea what dress I will wear!!!