If I Can Fool You

If I could fool you, I surely would
You’d be mine, your beauty understood
I would fool you that my heart is sublime
I would give you red roses every day
To fool you into loving me
I would kiss you softly on the lips
Sweetly I shall whisper have I fooled you yet?
I would hold you hand on seashore walks
Enchanting your eyes with my fables and talks
Every word would be crafted so
So that I may be certain I fooled you so
In the dusk, on a moonlit night
Candles flicker upon our evening meal
As I plan and deceive your heart to steal
Once its captured, and your in my arms
I would smile so brightly
You being my prize and charm
I know for sure you will entice me still   
And with a kiss right upon my lips
You will laugh and dance and toss me a kiss
With a question I already knew long ago
You will ask me
Who fooled who?


Notes, This was inspired by Eileen Manassian Ghali, and her poem "I'm not fooled"
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Anderson Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Arthur, Wow I randomly came upon this write and was blown away! Passionately written with deep emotions! So filled with much romance. Love it! Its a 7! Meg
Vaso Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 5:21 PM
You are so kind! Hugs!
Mcunu Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 4:29 AM
this is really master piece maybe im also fooled by your words that gives hope to my long dead heart. keep up the great work ...
Vaso Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 6:42 PM
Thanks Zakhe glad you enjoyed!!!
Canon Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 12:52 AM
You always put me into the scene reading your poems. I just love this one.
Vaso Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 6:56 PM
Thanks for your kind words John
Lindley Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 10:19 AM
A silver tongue that flows by way of a pen! A great one my friend and chosen for poem of the day, bravo!!! Catching up on commenting to the sinners in this feature. I simply missed it for days and days...
Vaso Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 6:55 PM
Thank you Robert, I am doing some catching up myself!!
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July 28, 2014 at 8:14 AM
Hey!!! You got to be poem of the day with this write! ;) Can I bask in some of the glory as it WAS due to MY inspiring poem! HA HA! Hugs..and congrats!
Vaso Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 6:54 PM
Thanks Eileen, and yes you sure can, your beauty outshines all !!!!
Carrillo Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 4:07 PM
A very nice poem. I would never try to to fool anyone, but that's just me. Thaks for sharing... Lucilla
Vaso Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 6:54 PM
Thanks Lucilla, I didn't mean it literally, I meant quite the opposite!
Nance Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 4:19 PM
Well well sweetheart, Poem of The Day, Way to go! Glad I got back from rehab to read this one...again ;)
Vaso Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 6:52 PM
Thank Cas , Lets have a drink and celebrate!!!!
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July 25, 2014 at 1:54 PM
- I have not noticed this "Poem of the Day" page before ...... I have been fooled :) - Well done, Arthur !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 6:51 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, I was unaware as well!
Smith Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 4:21 AM
Hey you are the poem of the day...no fooling
Vaso Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 6:51 PM
And Fool of the year!
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July 24, 2014 at 5:26 PM
Very well done, Arthur. There is much truth to this one. And you have captured the honesty of one that feels it necessary to deceive in order to win the love of another. Enjoyed it my friend.... Robert.
Vaso Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 8:53 PM
Thanks Robert, when we fall in love we are all fools, but in a very good way!!
Nance Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 12:05 PM
I would totally let you fool me sweetheart ;) it would be worth it. great poem my friend, I had missed you this week with my internet down but I am back and happy to read you. xox
Vaso Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 8:52 PM
Nice to see you back from rehab, how about some fooling around!!! Thanks Cas!!!!
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July 24, 2014 at 6:00 AM
Oh, Arthur..... you know what a romantic fool I am. This is like throwing me candy....... ;-) I'm touched to the core and what's more...... I'm going to fav this beauty of yours. Not because its inpiration came from my silly rant, though I'm glowing with that knowledge, but because it is gentle and sweet.....Romance at its best with a touch of passion about to bloom. Thanks for being a sweetheart.
Vaso Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 8:49 PM
Oh I was sure you would like this one , I was smiling as the idea formed in my mind
Callus Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 2:14 AM
You have been well inspired, my friend! I know from experience that when we fool others we are also fooling ourselves! // paul
Vaso Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 8:49 PM
Thanks Paul
Smith Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 11:45 PM
So romantic..... Tomorrow is ladies night...hmmm
Vaso Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 11:51 PM
Thanks Tim, coming from you, its a real complement because you are sure good at that style, and yes tomorrow is scarey, I have no idea what dress I will wear!!!
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