Premiere Contest WinnerIf I Am the Morning Star

Take my hand, darling,
You've once told me that I am
The dark nightmare's heaven shine —
Well, you've told me more times
Than you might like to hear
For during those times, your heart
Was a black hole of misery.
But the black hole in yourself, my rose
Will never be enough to drown out the light
That I wish to impart to you.

Take my hand, darling,
And I will ensure that you never 
Drown in the ocean of doubt again.
You will never again
Find yourself with a bottle of pills
And a final note in your hands.

Take my hand, darling,
If you call me your starlight,
Then allow me to impart to you the hope,
The joy, the faith,
The light,
That you yourself instilled in me.
Allow me to ignite in you the
Flame of life again.

Take my hand, darling,
If I really am the stellar light you say I am,
If I really am your morning star.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Neumann Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 5:31 AM
Francesca. Congratulations for coming first in my contest. Your poem is exquisitely meaningful. Knowing about addiction both professionally and personal, it spoke to be. Thank you, Kai
Rt Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 5:53 AM
I'm glad you thought my poem was good enough to come out on top! All I wished was to help people through it, as I have said, become their morning star.
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October 17, 2017 at 7:04 AM
Breathtaking piece Franchesca, a beautiful original and warming take on this contest, just wonderful :) congratulations on your top win! xomo
Krampe Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:08 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Franchesca.
Rt Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 5:52 AM
Thank you very much!
Ashley Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Such a beautifully angelic write Franchesca, pure and full of light, love and compassion. Wonderfully written and enchanting from start to finish. Enjoyed! Congratulations on your well-deserved top top win!!
Rt Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:09 AM
Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
Flower Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 1:17 AM
Such a deserving win. Congrats!
Rt Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:09 AM
Thank you very much!
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 10:20 PM
Gorgeous write, Franchesca, and a well-deserved winner - congratulations for the honor! :-)
Rt Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:51 PM
Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
Roper Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 3:51 PM
Nicely done, Franchesca, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Rt Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:51 PM
Hugs to you too, thank you!
Hamilton Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 12:23 PM
This is a wonderful and comforting write you have done Franchesca, worthy of the win!
Rt Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:54 PM
Thanks, I'm glad you think so!
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