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I touch myself hoping you are with me; Days are long and through the night stars keeps me awake I keep having flashes of you but it’s all just the light Do you feel this wind which keeps blowing outside? If this is my last night in this light; Will you come and switch it on for me? Even the noisy dogs seems to not destruct me to this passion What is this feeling am I having? For it’s so hard to get it away? Every day that pass is leaving a hole to my soul No this is really the feeling I have been hoping for The feeling of you and I on the mountains of Gods But is it supposed to be like this; If our destiny is keep surpassing me like this; Can I let it pass without a fight? I planned so many yet none has happened. If only we could just meet now before sunset So that we can stop the defeat darkness with love

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Date: 11/13/2014 6:14:00 AM
Congrats on the win with this wonderful write,
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Zakhe Michael Mcunu
Date: 12/2/2014 12:16:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/25/2014 1:22:00 AM
Love will always defeat darkness, no matter how impossible it may seem. I know how it feels to be lonely, and I hope that you will meet this special person soon!.... I enjoyed reading this very passionate and soulful write. Great work!
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Zakhe Michael Mcunu
Date: 12/2/2014 12:18:00 PM
I hope so too as darkness is engulfing me to its deep valley..

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