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If I - Tryodine

If I (Tryodine) form of poetry by Yancy Dalton If I were a fly I could fly If I were a bee I could be If I were a person I would be me Diana Dalton 10 Aug 2012

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Cory Long

Date: 8/11/2012 11:59:00 AM

this was awesome.. Nicely done I have never seen this form done before.. Cory

Diana Dalton
Date: 8/11/2012 7:16:00 PM

Thank you Cory. No it is not known here yet but is on my other poetry group. http://lightxpressions.hubpages.com/hub/Tryodine

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/11/2012 11:02:00 AM

you are a poet so write,lol,great write Diana

Diana Dalton
Date: 8/11/2012 7:21:00 PM

Getting there Richard. That's just part of the experience of being me.Thanks for the feed back!looking forward to meeting everyone!