Carolyn Devonshire Poet Monorhyme

If For Just One Magical Day

If for just one magical day

eradicate poverty
  reverse inequality
    restore sensibility
      prohibit inhumanity
        instill humility
          eliminate brutality
            generate amity
              promote civility
                crush depravity	
                  encourage creativity
                    celebrate diversity
                      end disunity

If for just one magical day
Take the ills of humanity away


June 22, 2014

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Mark Trichet July 17, 2014 at 4:06 AM If only Carolyn, if only... Maybe we can ALL start with this poem. Congrats on a lovely poem

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 16, 2014 at 10:32 PM This is so lovely Carolyn! beauty of thoughts ,, trust ur magic works n we all land up in heaven,, congrats on huge win!

Robert Lindley July 16, 2014 at 9:43 PM I really like this one my friend!! Congrats......

Arlene Smith July 16, 2014 at 9:07 PM I love this one, Carolyn!.. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs... Arlene

Jslambert Mister Roboto June 26, 2014 at 10:29 AM oops forgot the 7 ...Im gonna find just one of your poems that I don't like and Im gonna rip it to shreds , JUST so u don't think Im obsessed with your writing. LOL. ok. maybe that's not a good idea. Plus i'd be searching a damn long time. KEEP WRITING!

Jslambert Mister Roboto June 26, 2014 at 10:26 AM this is right up my alley! I love this style and the flow is impeccable! I accidentally write poems in this style in my notebooks daily. I RARELY write with intention to fulfill a form. Maybe YOU could sift through my scribble and categorize my jumble LOL. Fat chance huh!?! Back to you, this poem is a HOT SEVEN and one of my new favorites. I READ so very little, This makes me read more.

Jack Horne June 25, 2014 at 5:13 PM yes, if only...

Richard Lamoureux June 24, 2014 at 7:29 AM I like how you took the one wish and expressed it in layers. It demonstrates the depth of your spirit.

Robert Nehls June 23, 2014 at 3:59 AM Wouldn't it be wonderful, Carolyn. The magic is there, and we can make it happen in our world and maybe it will spread to the rest of the world. We are never alone.... Robert.

Justin Bordner June 22, 2014 at 1:45 PM To remove the strife of life, where would our strength go; I suppose to to the strength of unified joy. Great poem of positive love Carolyn. J.A.B.

Michael J. Falotico June 22, 2014 at 9:09 AM Wonderful form!! miss you and everyone so much... stopping in to say hi and post a few poems miss n luv u xoox

Harry Horsman June 22, 2014 at 7:31 AM Oh this is lovely, Carolyn so happy to have read you again, i dont come on board much now a days.. Yet,,,the title of your poem,,,could not have said it better,,,,,,,,, having seen this wonder,,, you make my magical day...

Eileen Manassian June 22, 2014 at 5:50 AM What a glorious day that would be! Lovely poem... like the layout and your choice of words. Thank you for your visits to my work. I'm touched by your kind comments. Carolyn Devonshire June 22, 2014 at 11:26 AM You're a talented write, Eileen. I enjoyed reading your work!

Tim Smith June 22, 2014 at 5:24 AM Perfect...You have an amazing heart...hugs Tim

Ravi Sathasivam June 22, 2014 at 4:07 AM Excellent. Very knowledgeable write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Jan Allison June 22, 2014 at 2:26 AM Wouldn't it be amazing Carolyn - something we can dream of I hope one day it could happen. Hugs jan xxx

Mohan Chutani June 22, 2014 at 2:14 AM Carolyn, then we will get a heaven on the earth. well described. Mohan Carolyn Devonshire June 22, 2014 at 5:25 AM Perhaps a seed of kindness is just what we need to achieve a more lasting peace for our world. Thanks for reading, Arthur. More than anything, peace would be my ultimate goal.

Arthur Vaso June 22, 2014 at 12:45 AM Wow wow wow wow, loved this!!!!!! If we all just planted one seed of kindness how true this could all be!!!