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If For Just One Magical Day

If for just one magical day eradicate poverty reverse inequality restore sensibility prohibit inhumanity instill humility eliminate brutality generate amity promote civility crush depravity encourage creativity celebrate diversity end disunity If for just one magical day Take the ills of humanity away June 22, 2014

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Mark Trichet

Date: 7/17/2014 4:06:00 AM

If only Carolyn, if only... Maybe we can ALL start with this poem. Congrats on a lovely poem

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/16/2014 10:32:00 PM

This is so lovely Carolyn! beauty of thoughts ,, trust ur magic works n we all land up in heaven,, congrats on huge win!

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/16/2014 9:43:00 PM

I really like this one my friend!! Congrats......

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/16/2014 9:07:00 PM

I love this one, Carolyn!.. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs... Arlene

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/26/2014 10:29:00 AM

oops forgot the 7 ...Im gonna find just one of your poems that I don't like and Im gonna rip it to shreds , JUST so u don't think Im obsessed with your writing. LOL. ok. maybe that's not a good idea. Plus i'd be searching a damn long time. KEEP WRITING!

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/26/2014 10:26:00 AM

this is right up my alley! I love this style and the flow is impeccable! I accidentally write poems in this style in my notebooks daily. I RARELY write with intention to fulfill a form. Maybe YOU could sift through my scribble and categorize my jumble LOL. Fat chance huh!?! Back to you, this poem is a HOT SEVEN and one of my new favorites. I READ so very little, This makes me read more.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/25/2014 5:13:00 PM

yes, if only...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/24/2014 7:29:00 AM

I like how you took the one wish and expressed it in layers. It demonstrates the depth of your spirit.

Robert Nehls

Date: 6/23/2014 3:59:00 AM

Wouldn't it be wonderful, Carolyn. The magic is there, and we can make it happen in our world and maybe it will spread to the rest of the world. We are never alone.... Robert.

Justin Bordner

Date: 6/22/2014 1:45:00 PM

To remove the strife of life, where would our strength go; I suppose to to the strength of unified joy. Great poem of positive love Carolyn. J.A.B.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/22/2014 9:09:00 AM

Wonderful form!! miss you and everyone so much... stopping in to say hi and post a few poems miss n luv u xoox

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/22/2014 7:31:00 AM

Oh this is lovely, Carolyn so happy to have read you again, i dont come on board much now a days.. Yet,,,the title of your poem,,,could not have said it better,,,,,,,,, having seen this wonder,,, you make my magical day...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/22/2014 5:50:00 AM

What a glorious day that would be! Lovely poem... like the layout and your choice of words. Thank you for your visits to my work. I'm touched by your kind comments.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/22/2014 11:26:00 AM

You're a talented write, Eileen. I enjoyed reading your work!

Tim Smith

Date: 6/22/2014 5:24:00 AM

Perfect...You have an amazing heart...hugs Tim

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/22/2014 4:07:00 AM

Excellent. Very knowledgeable write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Jan Allison

Date: 6/22/2014 2:26:00 AM

Wouldn't it be amazing Carolyn - something we can dream of I hope one day it could happen. Hugs jan xxx

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/22/2014 2:14:00 AM

Carolyn, then we will get a heaven on the earth. well described. Mohan

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/22/2014 5:25:00 AM

Perhaps a seed of kindness is just what we need to achieve a more lasting peace for our world. Thanks for reading, Arthur. More than anything, peace would be my ultimate goal.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/22/2014 12:45:00 AM

Wow wow wow wow, loved this!!!!!! If we all just planted one seed of kindness how true this could all be!!!