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If death was the only truth

If death was the only truth-
I wouldn't have lived for years,
and my ears would not have come across all
these melodies.
My eyes wouldn't have wept for the beauty of aurora- 
the skin should not be touched by his touch- 
the tongue should not be spelling these prayers- 
if death was the only truth!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/25/2018 4:59:00 PM
Glad death not the only truth, Truth is, death will be done away with on EARTH when God's will is DONE on earth. This why Christ taught us to pray for this outcome. Are you writing currently? Just found you. bbn
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Date: 8/4/2016 4:46:00 PM
Beautiful write.... but this is NOT a Ghazal... free verse maybe...
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Pushpa Palanchoke
Date: 9/23/2016 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Pashang-may be its a free verse :)
Date: 2/28/2016 8:27:00 AM
Pushpa Palanchoke, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Pushpa Palanchoke
Date: 9/23/2016 12:18:00 PM
Hey Linda, Thank you. Much love. I do not visit poetry soup often but may be now I should :)
Date: 1/7/2016 1:19:00 AM
Pushpa, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ~SKAT~
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Pushpa Palanchoke
Date: 9/23/2016 12:19:00 PM
Hey Skat, I remember two years back you were the first erson to comment on my first ever posts. Thanks