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If Chronic Pain Were Olympic Sport

'If chronic pain were Olympic sport' Morning shocks me with a jolt Night time flies like Usain Bolt If dream of sleep were 'lympic pride My pain within I'd win not hide If feeling tired, was winning gold My chronic illness medal hold We would be there chasing Mo If energy won at being low If 'pushing through' meant top of game And trembling hands meant pride and fame If migraine vice meant all things nice And neck strain drain meant King of pain If winning crunch was base of spine Or BP drop that renders blind We would excel Olympic pride Where no one you love would dream you 'lied' They'd even know it's genes so fate They'd say 'I believe' not 'you exaggerate' If feeling drained was strong like Phelps Where tiredness reigns and brain fog helps POTS fatigue, compression nylons Clunky shoulders easy bronze If Olympian meant broken bowel We'd feel their pain, lay on beach towel For every day we feel that burn From joints all round and stomach churn If chronic pain were Olympic pride We'd win hands down, in bed would hide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/25/2016 9:11:00 PM
Wow great poem Victoria! Keep writing! Can't wait to read more from you!
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Victoria Payne
Date: 8/30/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thank you! Loads more on my profile and about another 40+ still to upload!
Date: 8/24/2016 10:03:00 AM
This is a Beautifully written poem on chronic illness.A lot of people don't understand the pain and fatigue that goes with M.S.or fibromyalgia.I feel this every day so thank you for putting it into these amazing words.
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Victoria Payne
Date: 8/24/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Jessica always nice to hear from fellow chronic pain sufferers, they're the only ones that truly 'get it' am slowly uploading all my poems on to this site but I have loads!
Date: 8/20/2016 5:10:00 AM
Victoria, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Victoria Payne
Date: 8/20/2016 7:37:00 AM
Oh bless you thanks so much for the kind words! I have been adding my poems to my own FB group here https://m.facebook.com/groups/Poemsbyvictoriapayne/
Date: 8/19/2016 9:33:00 AM
Excellent metaphor Victoria and your rhymes and meter were spot on.
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Victoria Payne
Date: 8/20/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thank you :) looking forward to learning from people with a more technical knowledge, I just blurt them out!

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