If Chronic Pain Were Olympic Sport

'If chronic pain were Olympic sport'

Morning shocks me with a jolt
Night time flies like Usain Bolt
If dream of sleep were 'lympic pride
My pain within I'd win not hide
If feeling tired, was winning gold 
My chronic illness medal hold
We would be there chasing Mo
If energy won at being low

If 'pushing through' meant top of game 
And trembling hands meant pride and fame 
If migraine vice meant all things nice 
And neck strain drain meant King of pain
If winning crunch was base of spine
Or BP drop that renders blind
We would excel Olympic pride
Where no one you love would dream you 'lied'
They'd even know it's genes so fate
They'd say 'I believe' not 'you exaggerate'

If feeling drained was strong like Phelps
Where tiredness reigns and brain fog helps 
POTS fatigue, compression nylons
Clunky shoulders easy bronze
If Olympian meant broken bowel
We'd feel their pain, lay on beach towel 
For every day we feel that burn 
From joints all round and stomach churn
If chronic pain were Olympic pride
We'd win hands down, in bed would hide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 8/25/2016 9:11:00 PM
Wow great poem Victoria! Keep writing! Can't wait to read more from you!
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Victoria Payne
Date: 8/30/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thank you! Loads more on my profile and about another 40+ still to upload!
Date: 8/24/2016 10:03:00 AM
This is a Beautifully written poem on chronic illness.A lot of people don't understand the pain and fatigue that goes with M.S.or fibromyalgia.I feel this every day so thank you for putting it into these amazing words.
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Victoria Payne
Date: 8/24/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Jessica always nice to hear from fellow chronic pain sufferers, they're the only ones that truly 'get it' am slowly uploading all my poems on to this site but I have loads!
Date: 8/20/2016 5:10:00 AM
Victoria, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Victoria Payne
Date: 8/20/2016 7:37:00 AM
Oh bless you thanks so much for the kind words! I have been adding my poems to my own FB group here https://m.facebook.com/groups/Poemsbyvictoriapayne/
Date: 8/19/2016 9:33:00 AM
Excellent metaphor Victoria and your rhymes and meter were spot on.
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Victoria Payne
Date: 8/20/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thank you :) looking forward to learning from people with a more technical knowledge, I just blurt them out!
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