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If Children Were Puppies

IF MY CHILDREN WERE PUPPIES THEY’D BE NICER TO ME. THEY WOULD NOT BE FUSSY AND TALK BACK YOU SEE. SIT BRAVE AND LOYAL NOT TRY TO RUN AND HIDE. AND FAITHFULLY FOLLOW NEVER LEAVING MY SIDE. BUT IF CHILDREN WERE PUPS THEN THEY MIGHT EAT LIKE HOGS CHEW YOUR GOOD SHOE MAYBE HIDE YOUR CLOGS AND IF CHILDREN WERE PUPPIES, THEN WE’D ALL BE DOGS! Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 12.02.2012

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Darlene Gifford

Date: 10/27/2014 6:56:00 PM

Hi, Brenda, You shape poem is creative and shows how talented you are! I loved it. Also, thank you for commenting on my poem today "A Poet's Day" I tried to answer you on my page where this poem is, but I am somehow blocked. I got your message from comments. But when I click on View. I am sent to the (poem, research engine.) And when I click on (new poems) etc. I get sent to the same place. So I am blocked. Have let them know in an e-mail. Hope I can get back to normal soon.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/4/2014 10:59:00 PM

Love this peace Brenda, what a great imagination :) eve

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/5/2014 12:28:00 PM

Thank you Eve

Daniel Human

Date: 9/16/2014 12:00:00 PM

Ah, wonderful! My wife sat next to me and proclaimed your wisdom! Love it, Daniel.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/16/2014 12:24:00 PM

wow, thanks for the compliment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2014 10:47:00 PM

this is FANTASTICO> Wow. ARen't you the clever one. I can't figure out computers well enough to attempt something like this!!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/16/2014 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Andrea. I love doing these. Gives me a challenge.

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/13/2014 12:30:00 PM

Surely like would have been. God saved us indeed. You have reminded "like father like son". Beautiful conception worded beautifully. Loved always, my friend,bl

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/13/2014 8:01:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by.