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If Anything

If Anything, my life in twilight's grasp,
A realm of endings, where shadows clasp.
No deed can alter destiny's decree,
Yet bonds of attachment, I seek to flee.

Dreams of expectations, weighty and vast,
Hold me captive, in the echoes of the past.
May I break free from this relentless chain,
And find renewal, shedding old disdain.

If Anything, in the quiet of surrender,
New life may bloom, like a tender ember.
Overcoming the echoes of what has been,
A chance to emerge, from the cocoon within.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ibeh Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 6:21 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this fantastic penning, Jay. I love your last stanza!
Volumes Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 10:53 AM
A soulful poem Jay, from where I sit, you are perfect just as you are, but I am sure that you have the will power to break free from whatever is holding you back and emerge a happier man. Your poem is a fave for me dear friend.
Pandit Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 5:48 AM
A realm of endings, where shadows clasp--No deed can alter destiny's decree---your poem is quite deep, Jay
Baker Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 9:55 PM
A FAV for my list, Jay. I like the way you think and how you share your thoughts through your poetry. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
Poet Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 1:39 PM
Well crafted poem with a profound message and imagery
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 10:50 AM
- Great poem, Jay :) - hugs
Seeker Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 10:33 AM
Beautiful! Love the Buddha message too
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