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If

If I had your eyes I would conquer your view If I had your mind I would reside in you If I had your soul I would glow like you If I had your trust I would always be true If I had your heart I would always love you If I had your love I would surrender anew If I had your wisdom I would have married you December 18, 2017 Placed 3rd: Brian's Choice E contest

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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/16/2020 5:21:00 AM
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Yes, you said a lot with the last line..great poem.
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Vera Duggan
Date: 1/1/2018 12:11:00 AM
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Hi Vijay, really that word "if" might look like a small word but really it is a big word because it is used such a lot, if this and if that, you have done a great job with this little verse take care......Vera
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/1/2018 7:01:00 AM
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Thank you Vera.
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Pipping Stars
Date: 12/21/2017 1:45:00 PM
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lol ... last line me one more time ... with your dangling word geniusness ... your like a mood director ... conductor ... composer ... yeah ... your a beautiful album man ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/21/2017 3:22:00 PM
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Many thanks molly--appreciate your kind words.
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FJ Thomas
Date: 12/20/2017 5:23:00 PM
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Vijay this is a lovely piece!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2017 5:48:00 PM
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Thank you.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/19/2017 5:26:00 PM
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Excellent Vijay! Well done :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2017 9:30:00 AM
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Thank you Heidi.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/19/2017 1:31:00 PM
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Superb--especially the last two lines, Vijay! Love this! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2017 2:02:00 PM
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Thank you Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/19/2017 1:30:00 PM
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Superb--especially the last two lines, Vijay! Love this! Janice
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Silent One
Date: 12/19/2017 7:30:00 AM
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The one that got away.... Well expressed..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2017 9:03:00 AM
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Thank you Silent One.
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James Swartz
Date: 12/19/2017 12:06:00 AM
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Such a wonderful piece Vijay. Beauty from beginning to end with the perfect ending.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2017 5:38:00 AM
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Many thanks for your wonderful comments, James.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/18/2017 7:15:00 PM
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If I could scream into here, you would have heard me when I was done reading it and saying, I love it! And yes those two last lines are my faves :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2017 5:37:00 AM
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Many thanks for the cheerful comments, Akkina.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/18/2017 5:28:00 PM
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oh Vijay, I really love this one!!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2017 5:36:00 AM
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Thank you Andrea.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2017 3:58:00 PM
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I especially loved the final couplet, so glad to read its fiction Vijay!:-) hugs jan xx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 4:14:00 PM
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Enjoyed reading your comment Jan..thank you.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/18/2017 12:18:00 PM
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SO sad as it seems the love is lost. perhaps there is still a chance IF you keep trying, Great Poem !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 1:17:00 PM
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Thank you Mike--appreciate your comments..this is fiction.
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Harry Horsman
Date: 12/18/2017 10:40:00 AM
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IF a very small title, with an amazing meaning; your poem,,thanks for sharing,,love it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 1:17:00 PM
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Appreciate your comments harry--many thanks.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/18/2017 10:37:00 AM
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If...my dearest friend, Vijay...if, but I prefer you as you are! Thank you my friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 1:16:00 PM
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Thank you Demetrios--this is fiction...appreciate your feedback.!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/18/2017 9:32:00 AM
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Is is SO GOOD Vijay! Fave for this girl :) xomo!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 1:15:00 PM
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Enjoyed reading your comments..thanks, Maureen.
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Judith S
Date: 12/18/2017 9:22:00 AM
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Ohhhhh ... I love this Vijay! Very nicely done :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 1:14:00 PM
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Thank you Judy--appreciate your comments.

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