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If

If I had your eyes
I would conquer your view

If I had your mind
I would reside in you

If I had your soul
I would glow like you

If I had your trust
I would always be true

If I had your heart
I would always love you

If I had your love
I would surrender anew

If I had your wisdom
I would have married you

December 18, 2017
Placed 3rd: Brian's Choice E contest

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Debjani Mitra Date: 5/16/2020 5:21:00 AM Yes, you said a lot with the last line..great poem. Login to Reply

Vera Duggan Date: 1/1/2018 12:11:00 AM Hi Vijay, really that word "if" might look like a small word but really it is a big word because it is used such a lot, if this and if that, you have done a great job with this little verse take care......Vera Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/1/2018 7:01:00 AM Thank you Vera.

Pipping Stars Date: 12/21/2017 1:45:00 PM lol ... last line me one more time ... with your dangling word geniusness ... your like a mood director ... conductor ... composer ... yeah ... your a beautiful album man ... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/21/2017 3:22:00 PM Many thanks molly--appreciate your kind words.

FJ Thomas Date: 12/20/2017 5:23:00 PM Vijay this is a lovely piece! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/20/2017 5:48:00 PM Thank you.

Heidi Sands Date: 12/19/2017 5:26:00 PM Excellent Vijay! Well done :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/20/2017 9:30:00 AM Thank you Heidi.

Janice Canerdy Date: 12/19/2017 1:31:00 PM Superb--especially the last two lines, Vijay! Love this! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/19/2017 2:02:00 PM Thank you Janice.

Janice Canerdy Date: 12/19/2017 1:30:00 PM Superb--especially the last two lines, Vijay! Love this! Janice Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 12/19/2017 7:30:00 AM The one that got away.... Well expressed.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/19/2017 9:03:00 AM Thank you Silent One.

James Swartz Date: 12/19/2017 12:06:00 AM Such a wonderful piece Vijay. Beauty from beginning to end with the perfect ending. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/19/2017 5:38:00 AM Many thanks for your wonderful comments, James.

Akkina Downing Date: 12/18/2017 7:15:00 PM If I could scream into here, you would have heard me when I was done reading it and saying, I love it! And yes those two last lines are my faves :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/19/2017 5:37:00 AM Many thanks for the cheerful comments, Akkina.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/18/2017 5:28:00 PM oh Vijay, I really love this one!!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/19/2017 5:36:00 AM Thank you Andrea.

Jan Allison Date: 12/18/2017 3:58:00 PM I especially loved the final couplet, so glad to read its fiction Vijay!:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/18/2017 4:14:00 PM Enjoyed reading your comment Jan..thank you.

Mike Gentile Date: 12/18/2017 12:18:00 PM SO sad as it seems the love is lost. perhaps there is still a chance IF you keep trying, Great Poem !! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/18/2017 1:17:00 PM Thank you Mike--appreciate your comments..this is fiction.

Harry Horsman Date: 12/18/2017 10:40:00 AM IF a very small title, with an amazing meaning; your poem,,thanks for sharing,,love it. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/18/2017 1:17:00 PM Appreciate your comments harry--many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 12/18/2017 10:37:00 AM If...my dearest friend, Vijay...if, but I prefer you as you are! Thank you my friend! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/18/2017 1:16:00 PM Thank you Demetrios--this is fiction...appreciate your feedback.!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/18/2017 9:32:00 AM Is is SO GOOD Vijay! Fave for this girl :) xomo! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/18/2017 1:15:00 PM Enjoyed reading your comments..thanks, Maureen.

Judith S Date: 12/18/2017 9:22:00 AM Ohhhhh ... I love this Vijay! Very nicely done :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 12/18/2017 1:14:00 PM Thank you Judy--appreciate your comments.