If

If  

(inspired by Rudyard Kipling's Poem, If)

If I could relinquish all judging to Almighty God
Concerning myself on where my feet alone trod
Where my mind lounges
What my mood would convey
I believe I'd know peace of mind throughout the day

If I could be a sample ..fruit of wisdom heard
Regarding my brother's footsteps more intently than his word
If I could sow treasure when occasion coaxes me to intercede 
I believe a flower would emerge from such a planted seed

If I could rebuke gossip and ignore the adulterous call
Still appreciate the lesson taught from shame-producing fall
If I could view the weakest one with mercy-coated eyes
I believe there'd be scant reason to don all disguise

If I could dispense love when hatred is due and never restrict the span
Surrender to patience when urge to explode is primed by fellowman
If I could persist in mending any mendable wrong
I believe I would know freedom as composer of the song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 9, 2021 at 8:28 AM
Well written Joan. I especially like the thought in the line "Regarding my brother's footsteps more intently than his word". As the old saying goes, "actions speak louder than words". Bill Baker
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