If

If I were to say to you:
That your night is mine
A billion stars overhead
Lead me to your time
A Universe that leads nowhere
Except to you
Walking alone
Freedom in the abyss
Except with you
I forfeit my indifference
I care
©dbyrne march 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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September 27, 2014 at 10:22 AM
Beautiful... The way you describe it, the way you feel. It is hard to say what I feel reading it, but I definitely like what I see.
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