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If my melody is your voice, will you sing some notes for me? Melt and let me dance in your rhapsody, let me feel happy and be free... If my sweetness comes from your heart, will it beat twice faster than before? Enclosing me in a cocoon of warmth, plaguing me nothing but love If my gentleness caresses you, will you touch me soothingly? Lingering for quite sometime, leaving marks even years can't hide If my actions fills you, won't you mind hugging me? Drain me from uncertainties and miseries, quench me from all that's cruel and perishes... If by the mere presence of you energizes me, will you not remain being with me? Don't worry, am not asking for forever, I just want to start now or never... ---07/22/2013, hope its accepted though... :) ---- Contest: any poem # 5 Sponsored by: NATHAN D. Honorable Mention

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Date: 10/14/2014 4:30:00 PM
Your heart so desires wanting and tomorrows Olive, so so much, James :)
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Date: 3/21/2014 4:36:00 PM
Olive-eli congrats on your win; this is a lovely heartfelt poem. Hope you get rewarding answers to your questions :) // paul
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Date: 3/20/2014 1:41:00 AM
Olive, Congrats! Enjoyed your winning poem. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:41:00 PM
Olive:).... Congratulations, in Nathan's contest... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 8:06:00 AM
an awesome write , Olive.. Congratulations!!!! ..^__^
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Date: 3/19/2014 7:26:00 AM
Wonderful poetry and congrats on the fine win, olive
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Date: 7/23/2013 7:16:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it and love it!!!! Awesome emotions expressed here. That's what love is. :)
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Date: 7/22/2013 9:36:00 PM
deep emotions... be strong.... LINDA
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