If

If my melody is your voice, will you sing some notes for me?
            Melt and let me dance in your rhapsody, let me feel happy and be free...

          If my sweetness comes from your heart, will it beat twice faster than before?
               Enclosing me in a cocoon of warmth, plaguing me nothing but  love

                  If my gentleness caresses you, will you touch me soothingly?
                Lingering for quite sometime, leaving marks even years can't hide

                          If my actions fills you, won't you mind hugging me?
     Drain me from uncertainties and miseries, quench me from all that's cruel and perishes...

    If by the mere presence of you energizes me, will you not remain being with me?
         Don't worry, am not asking for forever, I just want to start now or never...


                            ---07/22/2013, hope its accepted though... :) ----

Contest: any poem # 5 
Sponsored by: NATHAN D.
Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Fraser Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 4:30 PM
Your heart so desires wanting and tomorrows Olive, so so much, James :)
Callus Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 4:36 PM
Olive-eli congrats on your win; this is a lovely heartfelt poem. Hope you get rewarding answers to your questions :) // paul
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March 20, 2014 at 1:41 AM
Olive, Congrats! Enjoyed your winning poem. Love ~SKAT~
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March 19, 2014 at 11:41 PM
Olive:).... Congratulations, in Nathan's contest... xox~ LINDA
Torres Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:06 AM
an awesome write , Olive.. Congratulations!!!! ..^__^
Mehta Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:26 AM
Wonderful poetry and congrats on the fine win, olive
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July 23, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Love it, love it, love it and love it!!!! Awesome emotions expressed here. That's what love is. :)
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July 22, 2013 at 9:36 PM
deep emotions... be strong.... LINDA
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