Adell Foster Poet Free verse

If

If my spirit was a color,
it would be psychedelic,
as beautiful as a rainbow ~
If my spirit were a taste,
it would be just like honey dew.
If my spirit were a feeling,
it would be as lovely as a spring day.
If my spirit were a smell,
it would be as sweet as a magnolia in bloom.
If my spirit were a sound,
it would be as harmonious as a sweet symphony
If you would receive of my joy,
I'd share it with all of you ~

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January 19, 2009 at 1:25 PM I really like this one. The use of multiple sense imagery is definitely a real strength in this poem. Love the last line. It gives the reader a personal touch. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

John Loving Iii December 28, 2008 at 12:47 PM such a nice piece with a short title. some times all it takes is one word and you used it well. john

Sharon Winter December 27, 2008 at 5:09 AM How lovely. Who would not want to be in the midst of such beauty? I would accept in an instant! Love, Shar