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If (A Corny Valentine - Tanka)

you are Salome I am your love-enslaved need you ask my dear? nay! ask thee not for my head I give you my heart instead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/22/2010 1:04:00 PM
lol very cute
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Date: 2/21/2010 4:23:00 AM
Chuckle. Delightful!
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Date: 2/14/2010 8:32:00 AM
cute
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Date: 2/10/2010 3:28:00 AM
Daver, I enjoyed your "corny valentine- tanka. And that is no bologna. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/9/2010 1:30:00 PM
This is a great fun poem, daver. I bet she takes it literally from your chest!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/7/2010 8:31:00 PM
I love it Daver! You are such a romantic soul! enjoyed this one much and thanks for your logical comment on my poem. Logic and common sense is a rare find in this day and age. God bless you my friend. -Robert
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Date: 2/7/2010 1:01:00 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Hope you don't have to give your head! Thanks for sharing this day brightener and for your kind comment. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 2/7/2010 11:41:00 AM
funny,
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