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Idyllic-Brevette

mountains
k i s s
sky

clouds
d e v o u r
sun



Date: 10/29/2020
Submitted for: IN Just A Few Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May

Second Place

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Susan Ashley

November 18, 2020 at 7:03 PM

Oh, Ani, I adore and admire the dramatic beauty your precious pen has captured in your superb brevity. Breathtaking and passionate imagery, my dear friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest.. ~Susa

Anitha Jayasankar

November 19, 2020 at 2:34 AM

Susan, thank you so much for your visit and these sweet words dear friend. Have a sweet blessed day. Love and hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

November 1, 2020 at 4:03 PM

A 'natural' for the winner's circle, Ani. Congrats to you. And, belatedly, Welcome to Poetry Soup! Cheers, Gershon

Anitha Jayasankar

November 1, 2020 at 10:55 PM

Thank you for the visit, comment and the warm welcome Gershon!!.. Have a great day.. :)

Andrea Dietrich

November 1, 2020 at 7:31 AM

Congrats. This was one of the best!

Anitha Jayasankar

November 1, 2020 at 8:41 AM

Thank you for the visit and comment Andrea.. Have a great day.. Hugs... :)

John Watt

October 31, 2020 at 11:38 PM

Your natural beauty 'shines' in this short poem, Ani. Congratulations on your win ~ John

Anitha Jayasankar

November 1, 2020 at 8:39 AM

Thank you so much for the visit and comment John.. Have a cheerful day.. :)

Eve Roper

October 31, 2020 at 10:44 PM

Anitha, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Anitha Jayasankar

October 31, 2020 at 11:20 PM

Thank you so much Eve for the visit and comment.. Love and hugs.. :)

Carol Mitra

October 31, 2020 at 9:28 PM

Nice Anitha....the first part similar to my poem :)

Anitha Jayasankar

October 31, 2020 at 11:07 PM

Thank you so much Carol... Is it? Let me check... :)

Jan Allison

October 31, 2020 at 3:18 PM

beautiful Anitha:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anitha Jayasankar

October 31, 2020 at 11:21 PM

Thank you so much Jan... Hugs... ~:)

Joseph May

October 31, 2020 at 12:52 PM

Very nicely done Anitha, Congrats on your win..

Anitha Jayasankar

October 31, 2020 at 11:18 PM

Thank you so much Joseph May.. The contest was interesting.. :)

Alexis Y.

October 31, 2020 at 11:39 AM

Hi Anitha, In just a few words, your imagery is spot on. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Anitha Jayasankar

October 31, 2020 at 11:19 PM

Thank you so much Alexis. You too have a wonderful day.. :)

Linda Alice Fowler

October 31, 2020 at 11:39 AM

Love this Anitha. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Anitha Jayasankar

October 31, 2020 at 11:22 PM

Thank you so much dear Linda!! Love and hugs.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 31, 2020 at 11:34 AM

- A great poem in a few words ... congratulations on your win, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anitha Jayasankar

October 31, 2020 at 11:23 PM

Thank you so much dear Anne!! Love and hugs.. :)

Andrea Dietrich

October 30, 2020 at 8:53 AM

wow, NOw THAT is how to do a brevette!!

Anitha Jayasankar

October 30, 2020 at 10:49 AM

Thank you so much Andrea... feeling good learning new forms of poetry... -hugs.. Gud night.. :)

Rama Balasubramanian

October 29, 2020 at 6:41 AM

Too good. Sure winner. All the best. Hope you are fine and all is well at home. Have a great day ahead. Regards Rama

Anitha Jayasankar

October 29, 2020 at 9:56 AM

Thanks Rama.. All good here dear. Hope u are fine too.. Hugs.. :)

Newton Ranaweera

October 29, 2020 at 6:01 AM

So vivid; so creative, Anitha!!

Anitha Jayasankar

October 29, 2020 at 9:54 AM

Thank you so much Newton Arach.. :)

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