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Idyllic Tranquility

A new day blossoms Strolling with us Beneath purple arc Holding hands of dawn In ruby, gold sunrise Yellow roses shine Summer’s vibrant smile Birds that know us well Twitter song of romance From fiery red maple tree That hosts their dance While daffodils sway Moods of amber winds For monarch butterflies Blazing red daisies adorn Side-walks on our path Lilies-- ruby, pink, white Vie for your grinning sight Gazing the blue skies Where a bald eagle flies Ubiquitous scenic vistas Lose us in pristine vibes Alluring verdant appeal Of forest-green canopies Breezing whistling winds Amidst idyllic tranquility Beckoning us incessantly September 2, 2020

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/5/2020 9:05:00 AM

A beautiful poem, Vijay. I can vision the "breezy whistling winds beckoning us". :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/12/2020 5:59:00 AM

I really enjoyed this. What a beautiful start to the day! Well written Vijay :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/5/2020 8:41:00 PM

When your words caress nature and its beauty, I feel as though I am surrounded by everything magical. Once again, you have created a masterpiece. I am drifting in your thoughts. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2020 4:44:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Always a delight to read your feedback. Much appreciate, as always, Brandy.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/5/2020 9:39:00 AM

This is so wonderful, it's a walk through tranquility.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2020 4:43:00 AM

Much appreciate MLK--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/5/2020 6:03:00 AM

Another excellent, vividly descriptive romantic poem set in nature, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2020 4:43:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2020 5:31:00 PM

this poem sings of effevescent scenes, vijay...much enjoyed..huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2020 4:42:00 AM

Thank you Nette--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2020 2:46:00 PM

so lovely and idyllic, Vijay. Was this for any contest? I see it a winner!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2020 4:42:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for your vote of confidence--much appreciate, as always.

John Fleming

Date: 9/4/2020 10:33:00 AM

I certainly do like your ideas for tranquillity, Vijay...serenity itself. Painted like a picture! My very best regards! :) john

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/4/2020 12:56:00 PM

Thank you John--much appreciate. Regards.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/4/2020 9:39:00 AM

You appeared to have whistled through this one nicely Vijay, have a great day , thanks for stopping by,

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/4/2020 12:56:00 PM

Much appreciate Vienna--many thanks.

Elaine George

Date: 9/4/2020 8:15:00 AM

What a beautiful scene you have created with your poetic style, dear Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/4/2020 12:55:00 PM

Thank you Elaine for your visit and comments--much appreciate.

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/4/2020 7:13:00 AM

Every stanza golden, the ending stanza icing on the cake and certainly my favorite. A fav.. God bless......

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/4/2020 12:55:00 PM

Much appreciate Robert--many thanks for your comments and a special thank you for the FAVE.

V. Deepa

Date: 9/3/2020 5:49:00 AM

Wow... Splendid imageries dear Vijay sir .. Was trying to sing your lines:-).I enjoyed the peaceful walk through your poem sir:-) Have a beautiful day.Take care.Warm regards

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/3/2020 8:16:00 AM

Thank you Deepa--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/2/2020 7:21:00 PM

Like Carolyn below, you took me in and i walked your walk, through this wonderful poetry..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/3/2020 5:04:00 AM

Much appreciate Harry--many thanks,

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/2/2020 9:22:00 AM

I love the joyful quality of your poem, Vijay. Your colorful descriptions made me feel like I was taking this morning walk with you. Truly beautiful! (Brian might like this one.) Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/2/2020 2:49:00 PM

So very kind of you my friend. Always happy to read your feedback, Carolyn. Much appreciate your valued remarks..many thanks.

Silent One

Date: 9/2/2020 9:03:00 AM

How beautiful it would be if every morning was like this... lovely use of words to create such vivid imagery my friend...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/2/2020 2:47:00 PM

Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, SO.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/2/2020 7:25:00 AM

Stunning imagery Vijay, Jennas right, its like something out of a fairytale. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/2/2020 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Tom--much appreciate, as always.

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/2/2020 6:05:00 AM

You've created a scene that should be in a Disney princess/prince movie. So very beautiful, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/2/2020 2:46:00 PM

I'm delighted by your visit and comments--much appreciate, Jenna. Many thanks.