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Idyllic Tranquility

A new day blossoms
Strolling with us
Beneath purple arc
Holding hands of dawn

In ruby, gold sunrise
Yellow roses shine
Summer’s vibrant smile

Birds that know us well
Twitter song of romance
From fiery red maple tree
That hosts their dance
While daffodils sway
Moods of amber winds
For monarch butterflies

Blazing red daisies adorn
Side-walks on our path
Lilies-- ruby, pink, white
Vie for your grinning sight
Gazing the blue skies
Where a bald eagle flies

Ubiquitous scenic vistas
Lose us in pristine vibes
Alluring verdant appeal
Of forest-green canopies
Breezing whistling winds
Amidst idyllic tranquility
Beckoning us incessantly

September 2, 2020

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Angela Crabtree Date: 10/5/2020 9:05:00 AM A beautiful poem, Vijay. I can vision the "breezy whistling winds beckoning us". :) Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 9/12/2020 5:59:00 AM I really enjoyed this. What a beautiful start to the day! Well written Vijay :) Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 9/5/2020 8:41:00 PM When your words caress nature and its beauty, I feel as though I am surrounded by everything magical. Once again, you have created a masterpiece. I am drifting in your thoughts. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/7/2020 4:44:00 AM Thank you my friend. Always a delight to read your feedback. Much appreciate, as always, Brandy.

M. L. Kiser Date: 9/5/2020 9:39:00 AM This is so wonderful, it's a walk through tranquility. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/7/2020 4:43:00 AM Much appreciate MLK--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy Date: 9/5/2020 6:03:00 AM Another excellent, vividly descriptive romantic poem set in nature, Vijay! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/7/2020 4:43:00 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/4/2020 5:31:00 PM this poem sings of effevescent scenes, vijay...much enjoyed..huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/7/2020 4:42:00 AM Thank you Nette--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/4/2020 2:46:00 PM so lovely and idyllic, Vijay. Was this for any contest? I see it a winner! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/7/2020 4:42:00 AM Thank you Andrea for your vote of confidence--much appreciate, as always.

John Fleming Date: 9/4/2020 10:33:00 AM I certainly do like your ideas for tranquillity, Vijay...serenity itself. Painted like a picture! My very best regards! :) john Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/4/2020 12:56:00 PM Thank you John--much appreciate. Regards.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/4/2020 9:39:00 AM You appeared to have whistled through this one nicely Vijay, have a great day , thanks for stopping by, Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/4/2020 12:56:00 PM Much appreciate Vienna--many thanks.

Elaine George Date: 9/4/2020 8:15:00 AM What a beautiful scene you have created with your poetic style, dear Vijay. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/4/2020 12:55:00 PM Thank you Elaine for your visit and comments--much appreciate.

Robert Lindley Date: 9/4/2020 7:13:00 AM Every stanza golden, the ending stanza icing on the cake and certainly my favorite. A fav.. God bless...... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/4/2020 12:55:00 PM Much appreciate Robert--many thanks for your comments and a special thank you for the FAVE.

V. Deepa Date: 9/3/2020 5:49:00 AM Wow... Splendid imageries dear Vijay sir .. Was trying to sing your lines:-).I enjoyed the peaceful walk through your poem sir:-) Have a beautiful day.Take care.Warm regards Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/3/2020 8:16:00 AM Thank you Deepa--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Harry Horsman Date: 9/2/2020 7:21:00 PM Like Carolyn below, you took me in and i walked your walk, through this wonderful poetry.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/3/2020 5:04:00 AM Much appreciate Harry--many thanks,

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/2/2020 9:22:00 AM I love the joyful quality of your poem, Vijay. Your colorful descriptions made me feel like I was taking this morning walk with you. Truly beautiful! (Brian might like this one.) Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/2/2020 2:49:00 PM So very kind of you my friend. Always happy to read your feedback, Carolyn. Much appreciate your valued remarks..many thanks.

Silent One Date: 9/2/2020 9:03:00 AM How beautiful it would be if every morning was like this... lovely use of words to create such vivid imagery my friend... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/2/2020 2:47:00 PM Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, SO.

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/2/2020 7:25:00 AM Stunning imagery Vijay, Jennas right, its like something out of a fairytale. Tom Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/2/2020 2:47:00 PM Thank you Tom--much appreciate, as always.

Jenna Logan Date: 9/2/2020 6:05:00 AM You've created a scene that should be in a Disney princess/prince movie. So very beautiful, Vijay. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/2/2020 2:46:00 PM I'm delighted by your visit and comments--much appreciate, Jenna. Many thanks.