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After The Party, I woke Up On A Tropical Island  Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: May 29, 2024

3rd place 

After the party on the boat, I fell into a deep slumber; I knew not what had happened. I woke up on a tropical island, my hands and legs tied with ropes. Carrying out CPR on me, the people there saved my life almost from the jaws of death. Serving all the delicacies they had, they made me a guest of theirs. Though their huts are so small, they had their hearts so large. And they welcomed me into their clan. With stunning coral atolls, crystal-clear lagoons and diverse landscapes... I found the island so idyllic, and I made it my home to be among the people who are so pure at heart, renouncing the place of deceit, where I came from!

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Date: 7/30/2024 7:14:00 PM
"stunning coral atolls, crystal-clear lagoons and diverse landscapes..." - A grand depiction. Congratulations!
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