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IDYLLIC FLIGHT

Stepping back remote from urban rhythm Dizzy I take flight asking only to surrender Wishing to drown in a long lost forgotten calm Reminiscing of that distant youthful idyllic calm When day and night danced in divine rhythm To soft nostalgic memories I ungrudgingly surrender Disentangle me I give my all and do surrender Desperate to retrieve a soothing blissful calm To reunite with mother nature’s nurtured rhythm Synchronize with life’s rhythm I surrender my heart to calm Submitted on February 12, 2019 for contest A TRITINA FOR MESSINA sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 2/26/2019 6:31:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative winning work. Way to go. Congrats. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara
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Date: 2/26/2019 10:13:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Sara.
Date: 2/24/2019 4:26:00 PM
so beautiful Line! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/24/2019 4:42:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/24/2019 4:04:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Line. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charlie
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/24/2019 4:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charles. Great contest.
Date: 2/13/2019 5:41:00 AM
You have made this Tritina seem seamlessly perfect. Brilliantly done, my friend. No surprise.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren, for your lovely visit and compliment.
Date: 2/13/2019 4:23:00 AM
Wow! Line this blends like magic well done my friend!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2019 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Bobby. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/13/2019 12:08:00 AM
Eloquent, nostalgic, and, yes, with a calming cadence. I enjoyed it a lot, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2019 12:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Bernard. My first attempt at this form.