Line Gauthier Poet Tritina

Idyllic Flight

Stepping back remote from urban rhythm
Dizzy I take flight asking only to surrender
Wishing to drown in a long lost forgotten calm

Reminiscing of that distant youthful idyllic calm 
When day and night danced in divine rhythm
To soft nostalgic memories I ungrudgingly surrender

Disentangle me I give my all and do surrender
Desperate to retrieve a soothing blissful calm
To reunite with mother nature’s nurtured rhythm

Synchronize with life’s rhythm I surrender my heart to calm



AP: 1st place 2025

Submitted on February 12, 2019 for contest A TRITINA FOR MESSINA sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA  -  RANKED 3RD

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Sara Kendrick February 26, 2019 at 6:31 AM Enjoyed reading your creative winning work. Way to go. Congrats. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara Line Gauthier February 26, 2019 at 10:13 AM Thanks for your visit and comment, Sara.

Jan Allison February 24, 2019 at 4:26 PM so beautiful Line! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Line Gauthier February 24, 2019 at 4:42 PM Thanks, Jan. Most appreciated.

Charles Messina February 24, 2019 at 4:04 PM Wonderful poem, Line. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charlie Line Gauthier February 24, 2019 at 4:42 PM Thank you so much, Charles. Great contest.

Caren Krutsinger February 13, 2019 at 5:41 AM You have made this Tritina seem seamlessly perfect. Brilliantly done, my friend. No surprise. Line Gauthier February 13, 2019 at 8:00 AM Thank you so much, Caren, for your lovely visit and compliment.

Bobby May February 13, 2019 at 4:23 AM Wow! Line this blends like magic well done my friend! Line Gauthier February 13, 2019 at 8:01 AM Thank you so much, Bobby. Most appreciated.

Bernard Chan February 13, 2019 at 12:08 AM Eloquent, nostalgic, and, yes, with a calming cadence. I enjoyed it a lot, Line. Line Gauthier February 13, 2019 at 12:15 AM Thank you so much, Bernard. My first attempt at this form.