Idyll Thoughts

So quietly considerate,
As I watch you read,
Inhale smoke from a cigarette,
Watching it recede. 

Expression indiscriminate,
Stagnant while you breathe, 
Positioned indeliberate, 
Adjacent to me.

Impossibles the alternate,
Despite fantasy,
Nothing could be this intimate,
As shared gravity. 

Every action is accurate,
Pure anatomy,
Everything’s more than adequate,
In your galaxy. 

Your fingers curl so intricate, 
Although randomly,
Turning pages to infinite, 
From a balcony. 

Idyll thoughts 9/15/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Peck Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 8:12 AM
"...turning pages to infinite from a balcony." I love those lines especially. Beautiful poem.
Faiola Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:00 PM
Thank you :)
Lawless Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 6:53 PM
this just captured some moments that I could really relate to....sweetened by times romantic edge. Thanks for participating in the contest Dominic
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 8:05 AM
Charming ~ congrats, Dominic
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