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Idyll of Daybreak Lake

Dreaming of idyllic forms Puzzle pieces mold as one Imaginary lines unrooted Petty pebbles sink in twilight Then suddenly I’m awake Laying here at daybreak lake. Early enough to see the dew Abreast my cold feet wading I watch ripples promptly cease As new ones dawn the trip A cycle our lives can relate Halcyonic touch of daybreak lake. Morning glory’s violets bloom Across the rivers foothill edging Streams aroma guides my pining To faded footprints of my youth Where aspen branches quake Sunny haze at daybreak lake. Minds heavy winds thudding Worldly pebbles wash ashore Submerging pleasant dreams That wake ideals from slumber While my heart's eye aches Reflecting late at daybreak lake.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/16/2015 6:04:00 PM
Nicholas, enjoyed the flow and imagery. This is the perfect poem. Hope you find the form you are searching for. Have a nice day. SKAT
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Date: 2/16/2015 6:18:00 PM
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